for King of the Pit1/31/2023 c2 Guest
Got my attention with this story and then you fucking abandon it after only 2 chapters…great job asshat
Got my attention with this story and then you fucking abandon it after only 2 chapters…great job asshat
12/5/2021 c2 Son of Vesta 16 - 2nd Account
This is a good story so far, the empousa part was a little weird, but if there would have been more it might have gotten better or made more sense to me? I just couldn't really see where the empousa part would be going. But this is a really great story! I wish you would continue...
This is a good story so far, the empousa part was a little weird, but if there would have been more it might have gotten better or made more sense to me? I just couldn't really see where the empousa part would be going. But this is a really great story! I wish you would continue...
9/4/2019 c2 Dumpster
Good continue
Good continue
9/27/2018 c2 Scotty
Why would you leave off here and not update for 5 months! Please update!
Why would you leave off here and not update for 5 months! Please update!
9/13/2018 c1 
5ChronoSeth
Is it really that good making someone evil? Warping reality to make him evil seems forced and demented so bye :)
5ChronoSethIs it really that good making someone evil? Warping reality to make him evil seems forced and demented so bye :)
9/9/2018 c2 ItsJohnCena
Where the fuck are u gonna update!
Where the fuck are u gonna update!
5/18/2018 c2 Hunter the ODG
I couldn't stop laughing at this XP
Thanks for writing this, I FINALLY have another funny fic to read. (about PJ)
Keep it up!
I couldn't stop laughing at this XP
Thanks for writing this, I FINALLY have another funny fic to read. (about PJ)
Keep it up!
4/29/2018 c2 Guest
You might want to find a way of making it more public that you're still updating stories. I honestly thought you were a dead account until I saw this totally by chance. Chapter was toit.
You might want to find a way of making it more public that you're still updating stories. I honestly thought you were a dead account until I saw this totally by chance. Chapter was toit.