
12/5/2021 c2 Son of Vesta 16 - 2nd Account
This is a good story so far, the empousa part was a little weird, but if there would have been more it might have gotten better or made more sense to me? I just couldn't really see where the empousa part would be going. But this is a really great story! I wish you would continue...
This is a good story so far, the empousa part was a little weird, but if there would have been more it might have gotten better or made more sense to me? I just couldn't really see where the empousa part would be going. But this is a really great story! I wish you would continue...
9/4/2019 c2 Dumpster
Good continue
Good continue
9/27/2018 c2 Scotty
Why would you leave off here and not update for 5 months! Please update!
Why would you leave off here and not update for 5 months! Please update!
9/13/2018 c1
5ChronoSeth
Is it really that good making someone evil? Warping reality to make him evil seems forced and demented so bye :)

Is it really that good making someone evil? Warping reality to make him evil seems forced and demented so bye :)
9/9/2018 c2 ItsJohnCena
Where the fuck are u gonna update!
Where the fuck are u gonna update!
5/18/2018 c2 Hunter the ODG
I couldn't stop laughing at this XP
Thanks for writing this, I FINALLY have another funny fic to read. (about PJ)
Keep it up!
I couldn't stop laughing at this XP
Thanks for writing this, I FINALLY have another funny fic to read. (about PJ)
Keep it up!
4/29/2018 c2 Guest
You might want to find a way of making it more public that you're still updating stories. I honestly thought you were a dead account until I saw this totally by chance. Chapter was toit.
You might want to find a way of making it more public that you're still updating stories. I honestly thought you were a dead account until I saw this totally by chance. Chapter was toit.
4/29/2018 c2 Guest
Sweet! Nice story, really enjoy the structure and the reimagined Tartarus, keep it up!
Sweet! Nice story, really enjoy the structure and the reimagined Tartarus, keep it up!