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12/23/2021 c3 dlowe2651
fucking awesome update again soon
11/30/2021 c3 Guest
Was ok but the OC was not needed. There are plenty of minor gods you could use that would fit better at this point.
7/2/2021 c2 Geek-God of Speed
Your using to many Japanese terms I have no idea what Musekiyōjin meant and it’s too hard to get a definition
2/14/2021 c3 yudhazebba
Next please
1/14/2021 c2 GreatT'Phon1of4
If the shinto gods came after the Mangekyo techniques, then the shinto gods are actually named after the Dojutsu techniques and not the other way around. The Uchiha would be so smug. Anyway, keep up the good work!
12/3/2020 c3 mattcun
I can't wait to see the next chapter
4/18/2020 c3 narutouzumaki9718
Great story please update soon!
12/2/2019 c3 sahhhhhh
did i miss something, need a bit of exposition on Atlanta and Visaly
7/30/2019 c1 bananahead1
no i wont join him when theres only 6000 words
10/23/2018 c3 YuukiAsuna-Chan
OC sucks.
1/17/2018 c3 4Monster King
Great story I really liked it can't wait until the next update comes.
12/14/2017 c3 XGalenMarekX
I really liked this so far. Your grammar is good, i can read without my eyes bleeding like most of ffs here. Premise is good too. I hope you can give time for main pairing in next chapters. Also that was a very large timeskip. Maybe you can consider some flashbacks?

Anyway, i am mostly excited because of Rhea pairing. Really i was waiting for it, she and Hestia are my favorites among asshole and rapist shits in Olympians. They need some serious attention instead of that slut(Aphrodite). I hope you can update regularly and don't abandon this.
11/27/2017 c3 Kage ongami
Great chapters really hope to see naruto in this avatar
11/23/2017 c3 ARSLOTHES
looking forward to the next chapter
11/21/2017 c3 1Davidlhson
I like this story looking forward to the next chapter
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