for Procured Immortality11/30/2021 c3 Guest
Was ok but the OC was not needed. There are plenty of minor gods you could use that would fit better at this point.
Was ok but the OC was not needed. There are plenty of minor gods you could use that would fit better at this point.
7/2/2021 c2 Geek-God of Speed
Your using to many Japanese terms I have no idea what Musekiyōjin meant and it’s too hard to get a definition
Your using to many Japanese terms I have no idea what Musekiyōjin meant and it’s too hard to get a definition
1/14/2021 c2 GreatT'Phon1of4
If the shinto gods came after the Mangekyo techniques, then the shinto gods are actually named after the Dojutsu techniques and not the other way around. The Uchiha would be so smug. Anyway, keep up the good work!
If the shinto gods came after the Mangekyo techniques, then the shinto gods are actually named after the Dojutsu techniques and not the other way around. The Uchiha would be so smug. Anyway, keep up the good work!
412/14/2017 c3 XGalenMarekX
I really liked this so far. Your grammar is good, i can read without my eyes bleeding like most of ffs here. Premise is good too. I hope you can give time for main pairing in next chapters. Also that was a very large timeskip. Maybe you can consider some flashbacks?
Anyway, i am mostly excited because of Rhea pairing. Really i was waiting for it, she and Hestia are my favorites among asshole and rapist shits in Olympians. They need some serious attention instead of that slut(Aphrodite). I hope you can update regularly and don't abandon this.
I really liked this so far. Your grammar is good, i can read without my eyes bleeding like most of ffs here. Premise is good too. I hope you can give time for main pairing in next chapters. Also that was a very large timeskip. Maybe you can consider some flashbacks?
Anyway, i am mostly excited because of Rhea pairing. Really i was waiting for it, she and Hestia are my favorites among asshole and rapist shits in Olympians. They need some serious attention instead of that slut(Aphrodite). I hope you can update regularly and don't abandon this.