for Thunder God's girl11/29/2020 c3 Bbygal
I love Lena but what about Giiiiiiiiin? That cliffhanger was brutal lmao
I love Lena but what about Giiiiiiiiin? That cliffhanger was brutal lmao
11/28/2020 c3 
1Otterly.adorkable
Hey! Don’t know why this fic was updated after such a long time, but it was certainly not unwelcome! Lena is so cute and adorable, especially when she overthinks things. And Laxus is such a sweetheart to help poor Lena out with her groceries. I hope this is a sign that this fic will have more updates in the future...?
1Otterly.adorkableHey! Don’t know why this fic was updated after such a long time, but it was certainly not unwelcome! Lena is so cute and adorable, especially when she overthinks things. And Laxus is such a sweetheart to help poor Lena out with her groceries. I hope this is a sign that this fic will have more updates in the future...?
7/22/2019 c2 16Coolfire30
I love it. There's just the right amount of suspense, character interactions, and is realistic enough in context of their (Laxus and crew) personalities. And I completely agree with your point on how there's no 'normal' OC characters in Fairytail fanfics, or at least in the ones we've read anyways.
Ahhhh, I'm truly intrigued with this concept of an OC admiring the main characters from afar, but still ends up being pulled in to their shenanigans. I hope you come back and continue with this story.
16Coolfire30I love it. There's just the right amount of suspense, character interactions, and is realistic enough in context of their (Laxus and crew) personalities. And I completely agree with your point on how there's no 'normal' OC characters in Fairytail fanfics, or at least in the ones we've read anyways.
Ahhhh, I'm truly intrigued with this concept of an OC admiring the main characters from afar, but still ends up being pulled in to their shenanigans. I hope you come back and continue with this story.
6/28/2017 c2 Ghostly guest
Haha man this is already going to turn out as an amazing fanfic! I love Lena and how we got to see Laxus' and hers' first conversation! Lol love it!
Haha man this is already going to turn out as an amazing fanfic! I love Lena and how we got to see Laxus' and hers' first conversation! Lol love it!
6/21/2017 c2 Mhoordin
Hey
I am very interested by your story :D
Interesting story about Laxus are so rare !
Your writting is so good , (I'm a fan of Hunter x Hunter : reborn )
Good continuation
And sorry for my English 3
Have a good day
Hey
I am very interested by your story :D
Interesting story about Laxus are so rare !
Your writting is so good , (I'm a fan of Hunter x Hunter : reborn )
Good continuation
And sorry for my English 3
Have a good day
6/17/2017 c2 1Otterly.adorkable
Oh my god please continue this! I like your oc so much because she tries to actually stay away from Fairy Tail but admires them from afar. All the other fanfics of Fairy Tail has a character that is really involved in the ongoings of the guild. Not to say those aren't good, they are, but your story is just a nice change of pace from a fresh perspective.
1Otterly.adorkableOh my god please continue this! I like your oc so much because she tries to actually stay away from Fairy Tail but admires them from afar. All the other fanfics of Fairy Tail has a character that is really involved in the ongoings of the guild. Not to say those aren't good, they are, but your story is just a nice change of pace from a fresh perspective.
6/16/2017 c2 CeresNamikaze
Un, hi. I confess that I saw this story only now and found myself very curious about it (seems pretty nice). I like Laxus, even if he's a b..., I like him so much and didn't find a lot of fic with OC paired with him (they are always with other character or usually Lucy with Lax), so I'm happy with this start (love their making out).
It's strange that nobody left a review yet, so here I am.
So... as I implied up the start is good, I really want to see how their relationship evolve -v-
Lena seems pretty cool, but is someone that I could easily relate (since she is only a normal girl... yeah)
Update soon nee, bye bye
Un, hi. I confess that I saw this story only now and found myself very curious about it (seems pretty nice). I like Laxus, even if he's a b..., I like him so much and didn't find a lot of fic with OC paired with him (they are always with other character or usually Lucy with Lax), so I'm happy with this start (love their making out).
It's strange that nobody left a review yet, so here I am.
So... as I implied up the start is good, I really want to see how their relationship evolve -v-
Lena seems pretty cool, but is someone that I could easily relate (since she is only a normal girl... yeah)
Update soon nee, bye bye