for Stubborn3/9/2021 c1 
21Ptool
this is fabulous! the movie Edward was much too arrogant for Bella to say yes to. Nice work!
21Ptoolthis is fabulous! the movie Edward was much too arrogant for Bella to say yes to. Nice work!
11/23/2019 c1 Blistful2006
Ha I love that she decided not to give into curiosity and Edward lost his chance perfect.
Ha I love that she decided not to give into curiosity and Edward lost his chance perfect.
4/1/2019 c1 Guest
I LOVE IT
I LOVE IT
5/26/2018 c1 106Theadosia57
Yes, It would have turned me off too. His behaviour was deplorable xx
Alexis
106Theadosia57Yes, It would have turned me off too. His behaviour was deplorable xx
Alexis
5/7/2018 c1 1Jullls
I loved! Please, continue
It would be nice to see how the story would follow
Carry on, I want more, please
1JulllsI loved! Please, continue
It would be nice to see how the story would follow
Carry on, I want more, please
2/17/2018 c1 Guest
For someone who kept talking about the snobby rich kids, Bella herself behaved like a first rate snob. Thinking about forks as hick town, about how she didn't work well with others was probably supposed to make her seem cool but only made her seem like a snobby that looked down at small town kids.
For someone who kept talking about the snobby rich kids, Bella herself behaved like a first rate snob. Thinking about forks as hick town, about how she didn't work well with others was probably supposed to make her seem cool but only made her seem like a snobby that looked down at small town kids.
10/12/2017 c1 lazygirl89
Love this, Bella/Tyler pairing is rarely done so I wish there was more to this.
Love this, Bella/Tyler pairing is rarely done so I wish there was more to this.
10/12/2017 c1 LouiseFisher
I like how you picture her, in her strong personality but also intuitive,not wallflower that's doesn't let Edward walk all over her like the story.
I though it was abusesive from the start by doing mentally/verbal without the physical evidence.
But it's was there from the start. Which's not healthy relationship that her father and her peers wanted for her.
Tyler's more easygoing for herself. I enjoyed Alice as friendship with Bella but also I could see Jasper being a friend too.
Has she was raised in Phoenix - where's there's of Spanish influences and I would have Bella swearing in Spanish with some choice words to say to Edward Cullen. Jasper would be so amused for hours for it. Would be willing to be friendly with his wife. But also find that Bella would understand where's he comes from with his history of vampire wars & his scars. I think she'll would had her grandfather that would had been in the second war and suffered with post traumatic stress disorder and would have flashbacks plus scars. She'll have learned that with her dad has he looked after him too before Bella came into adulthood.
I like how you picture her, in her strong personality but also intuitive,not wallflower that's doesn't let Edward walk all over her like the story.
I though it was abusesive from the start by doing mentally/verbal without the physical evidence.
But it's was there from the start. Which's not healthy relationship that her father and her peers wanted for her.
Tyler's more easygoing for herself. I enjoyed Alice as friendship with Bella but also I could see Jasper being a friend too.
Has she was raised in Phoenix - where's there's of Spanish influences and I would have Bella swearing in Spanish with some choice words to say to Edward Cullen. Jasper would be so amused for hours for it. Would be willing to be friendly with his wife. But also find that Bella would understand where's he comes from with his history of vampire wars & his scars. I think she'll would had her grandfather that would had been in the second war and suffered with post traumatic stress disorder and would have flashbacks plus scars. She'll have learned that with her dad has he looked after him too before Bella came into adulthood.