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2Illusion of a Storm
OKAY THIS IS SO CUTE NOW. Momo can't catch a break! Also, "Looking him in the eye while simultaneously being consoling was simply not possible when her brain's sole mission was wondering if her mouth opened too wide when she talked." may now be the most relatable description of what it's like to have a crush that I've seen in so long! Made me feel like I was the one suffering!
2Illusion of a StormOKAY THIS IS SO CUTE NOW. Momo can't catch a break! Also, "Looking him in the eye while simultaneously being consoling was simply not possible when her brain's sole mission was wondering if her mouth opened too wide when she talked." may now be the most relatable description of what it's like to have a crush that I've seen in so long! Made me feel like I was the one suffering!
5/3 c5 Illusion of a Storm
Okay, WOW, that got dark real fast! Poor Momo! It breaks my heart to see her suffer through this... she's just a kid and she already acts like the fate of her family rests on her shoulders. And we get to see Todoroki being a safe place for her, how sweet!
Thanks for sharing!
Okay, WOW, that got dark real fast! Poor Momo! It breaks my heart to see her suffer through this... she's just a kid and she already acts like the fate of her family rests on her shoulders. And we get to see Todoroki being a safe place for her, how sweet!
Thanks for sharing!
4/28 c3 Illusion of a Storm
Okay, I know you said this was tough and I believe you, but you've done so well in making it enjoyable. Todoroki really said, "You shouldn't worry about the temperature of the projectile, you couldn't even dodge it anyway" I was CACKLING the whole time!
Okay, I know you said this was tough and I believe you, but you've done so well in making it enjoyable. Todoroki really said, "You shouldn't worry about the temperature of the projectile, you couldn't even dodge it anyway" I was CACKLING the whole time!
4/28 c1 Illusion of a Storm
Hello hello hello! You asked for comments throughout, so I shall comply!
I'm so excited to finish reading this... the moment I read Shoto's "13 faults" line I *knew* deep inside my bones that I was going to LOVE this fic so so so much. I'm giddy to begin :)))
I am just enjoying the bond filled with tension that they share so far! Like they know that they're coming from the same spot but also they aren't at the same place- there's just so many layers there already, and it's only the first chapter!
Thank you SO much for sharing this with us!
Hello hello hello! You asked for comments throughout, so I shall comply!
I'm so excited to finish reading this... the moment I read Shoto's "13 faults" line I *knew* deep inside my bones that I was going to LOVE this fic so so so much. I'm giddy to begin :)))
I am just enjoying the bond filled with tension that they share so far! Like they know that they're coming from the same spot but also they aren't at the same place- there's just so many layers there already, and it's only the first chapter!
Thank you SO much for sharing this with us!
12/1/2024 c13 khaliagolden29
the way i shoukd fight you for how you made me cry and upset because he kept saying "idk" omfg.
the way i shoukd fight you for how you made me cry and upset because he kept saying "idk" omfg.
1/13/2024 c9 Guest
Oh. My. God.
Todoroki discovered sarcasm!
When a girl says something when they really mean the opposite!
I know some female individuals who use this method quite often!
Oh. My. God.
Todoroki discovered sarcasm!
When a girl says something when they really mean the opposite!
I know some female individuals who use this method quite often!
1/13/2024 c7 Guest
Omg im loving this story so far from her jumping out the window of Aizawa s office to Shotos blunt text message about them being friends at first I worried this would be one of those idiotic stories where the author completely ignored momos abilities but nope you’ve proved me wrong you’re doing great and i understand im late to the party and you might not read this but i appreciate you posting these stories.
Omg im loving this story so far from her jumping out the window of Aizawa s office to Shotos blunt text message about them being friends at first I worried this would be one of those idiotic stories where the author completely ignored momos abilities but nope you’ve proved me wrong you’re doing great and i understand im late to the party and you might not read this but i appreciate you posting these stories.
8/13/2023 c1 2marttapuustinen
Wow! This was maybe the best fanfic I’ve ever read out of any fandom ever (and that’s saying a lot ’cause you know… we’re all kinda addicted here lol xD)! I just couldn’t put it down once I had started and though I know I should be regretting this when my alarm goes off in exactly four hours and 17 minutes, I can, without a doubt, say that all my regrets will be washed away by the joy I got from reading this masterpiece through to the end. The plot was so amazingly crafted, the main characters beautifully written, and the flow of the entire work so well balanced. The emotional rollercoaster I went through while reading this was so totally worth every second of lost sleep lol.
Thank you so much for writing this, and I hope I’ll get to read many more of your stories in the future
2marttapuustinenWow! This was maybe the best fanfic I’ve ever read out of any fandom ever (and that’s saying a lot ’cause you know… we’re all kinda addicted here lol xD)! I just couldn’t put it down once I had started and though I know I should be regretting this when my alarm goes off in exactly four hours and 17 minutes, I can, without a doubt, say that all my regrets will be washed away by the joy I got from reading this masterpiece through to the end. The plot was so amazingly crafted, the main characters beautifully written, and the flow of the entire work so well balanced. The emotional rollercoaster I went through while reading this was so totally worth every second of lost sleep lol.
Thank you so much for writing this, and I hope I’ll get to read many more of your stories in the future
12/18/2022 c13 1Behindyu
10 out of 10 would read again
A perfect perspective on how a shotomomo love story should have went. I could comment all day the best points in your story are but I think ill dm it to you instead. So if you're still active here, prepare you ass for me. If not, then oh well
1Behindyu10 out of 10 would read again
A perfect perspective on how a shotomomo love story should have went. I could comment all day the best points in your story are but I think ill dm it to you instead. So if you're still active here, prepare you ass for me. If not, then oh well
10/21/2022 c13 Kay
Yaaas love it probably one of the best todomomo stories I’ve ever read. I wish you had put the ending scene when they started dating and announcing to their class or smth. I still love it tho️
Yaaas love it probably one of the best todomomo stories I’ve ever read. I wish you had put the ending scene when they started dating and announcing to their class or smth. I still love it tho️
2/21/2022 c13 6encre d'esprit
Gah! So beautifully written. I absolutely think you should do a sequel! Maybe life in dorms now that they’re a “thing”. More drama can encompass the couple. You definitely have a gift for writing, keep it up!
6encre d'espritGah! So beautifully written. I absolutely think you should do a sequel! Maybe life in dorms now that they’re a “thing”. More drama can encompass the couple. You definitely have a gift for writing, keep it up!
12/22/2021 c13 zuiwoshachang
MY GOD have I waited so long for the ending, I gave up checking after a few months. Boy am I glad I went with that random thought to do a quick search - that ending was EVERYTHING I have ever wanted from that story and SO much more than that!
MY GOD have I waited so long for the ending, I gave up checking after a few months. Boy am I glad I went with that random thought to do a quick search - that ending was EVERYTHING I have ever wanted from that story and SO much more than that!
9/10/2021 c3 Guest
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7/10/2021 c13 Feg
Omg loved and enjoyed this SO MUCHHH! Thankiuuuu
Omg loved and enjoyed this SO MUCHHH! Thankiuuuu