for The Loud House: If I Were a Christian5/22/2018 c4 BrokenBloke
I've read 4 chapters so far, & the biggest complaint I have with this story is that you need to space out your sentences, & paragraphs, a bit more, it's just 1 big block of text with no space.
Probably wouldn't hurt to add more details, but that's just a personal taste.
Idk I'm just not really into it. I get where you're going with this, but I just can't get into the grove, dude.
It's not half bad though, just keep writing.
I've read 4 chapters so far, & the biggest complaint I have with this story is that you need to space out your sentences, & paragraphs, a bit more, it's just 1 big block of text with no space.
Probably wouldn't hurt to add more details, but that's just a personal taste.
Idk I'm just not really into it. I get where you're going with this, but I just can't get into the grove, dude.
It's not half bad though, just keep writing.
5/12/2018 c8 Mr.Splashteen
I loved this story. It was amazing to see one of my favorite cartoon characters take the path of Jesus Christ.
I loved this story. It was amazing to see one of my favorite cartoon characters take the path of Jesus Christ.
4/25/2018 c1 Guest
Hello i haven't read loud mafia in years it was
one of my favorite fanfiction if you're reading this put it back if you can please I've read your
your other stuff when I was down put loud mafia had everything even if it wasn't yours please find a way to put it back up
God bless.
Hello i haven't read loud mafia in years it was
one of my favorite fanfiction if you're reading this put it back if you can please I've read your
your other stuff when I was down put loud mafia had everything even if it wasn't yours please find a way to put it back up
God bless.
1/23/2018 c7 Mr. Noname
Interestingly, the episode Fool's Paradise had one scene with Lana PRAYING of all things for hers and the family's pets back home. Ironically, that was one of the few bright spots in that episode.
Interestingly, the episode Fool's Paradise had one scene with Lana PRAYING of all things for hers and the family's pets back home. Ironically, that was one of the few bright spots in that episode.
12/22/2017 c7 Luis Abel Moran
Esta es la mejor historia de amor a Jesus y conversión que he leido. Dios es el todopoderoso y tiene el poder sobre los humanos el se merece todo el respeto y consideracion.
Esta es la mejor historia de amor a Jesus y conversión que he leido. Dios es el todopoderoso y tiene el poder sobre los humanos el se merece todo el respeto y consideracion.
12/20/2017 c7 Xxnidoxx
a cuestion Richie use glasses?
a cuestion Richie use glasses?
7/29/2017 c8 Guest
Can you make a sequel where Luna brings the rest of the family into Christianity?
Can you make a sequel where Luna brings the rest of the family into Christianity?
7/19/2017 c8 Guest
I love the christian message in this if you do continue this try some thing with lisa.
I love the christian message in this if you do continue this try some thing with lisa.
6/30/2017 c1 Guest
This wasn't very good, sorry.
This wasn't very good, sorry.
6/25/2017 c8 Guest
Lmao this story isn't even that offensive, it's just written poorly
Lmao this story isn't even that offensive, it's just written poorly
6/25/2017 c7 M.J.Y
God bless you I to wish to write story like this one day good luck Jesus loves you.
God bless you I to wish to write story like this one day good luck Jesus loves you.
6/24/2017 c8 Guest
Awesome story! Sad that it's over now. The story is great where it left off so I don't think that it has a need for an epilogue but if you decide to do one then make it where Sam finds Jesus.
Awesome story! Sad that it's over now. The story is great where it left off so I don't think that it has a need for an epilogue but if you decide to do one then make it where Sam finds Jesus.
6/24/2017 c8 
13Gennai Of Delphi Prime
It's gotta be said, there will always be people who blame the Almighty for all the issues of the world.
The worst part about it is, all suffering tends to be self-inflicted, and we don't even know it! Calvin (of all 6 year olds, he's quite the 6 year old we wished we could be.) from 'Calvin and Hobbes' said it best: "Isn't it tragic that people would cling to any preposterous delusion instead of an occasional bleak truth?"
13Gennai Of Delphi PrimeIt's gotta be said, there will always be people who blame the Almighty for all the issues of the world.
The worst part about it is, all suffering tends to be self-inflicted, and we don't even know it! Calvin (of all 6 year olds, he's quite the 6 year old we wished we could be.) from 'Calvin and Hobbes' said it best: "Isn't it tragic that people would cling to any preposterous delusion instead of an occasional bleak truth?"
6/24/2017 c8 lttlgreg
I sure would love to see a continuation of this, either it be this same story, or a sequel. Like the other family coming to Christ through Luna's testimony.
I am sure I would enjoy whatever you decide to do.
I sure would love to see a continuation of this, either it be this same story, or a sequel. Like the other family coming to Christ through Luna's testimony.
I am sure I would enjoy whatever you decide to do.