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1/29/2020 c1 Starlord Master
Luck is for losers.
7/8/2017 c1 2Flare The Sleepy
Ok i get what happened.
I get the message of this little thing but...
My question is this:
The stats like strength meant that the character literally had no strength at all? like a wet noddle?
and also...
What DID the "error message" of the game said to him after he accepted those (downright ridiculous and not really usefull) stats?
Which actually DOES make sense when you think about it, seriously.
How do you expect to survive on aura alone if you don't even have it unlocked?
Wisdom 0? might not be dumb but you'll probably look like a retarded
Luck 0? we ARE talking about a stat that changes the world so much, is downright idiotic to not have some (if not, a lot) of it so you don't have to fight the world, if it works like i think it does, it might be literally!
6/21/2017 c1 15Haloixix13
Engaging teacher mode: alright first things first, a story with a single chapter is called a "one shot".
Next thing, your spacing is great for a first time story, but you need to work on your capital letters.
Now for the rating: Your fanfic will have fewer viewers if you go the "M to be safe route" this fic would have been at most a "T".
I hope you will take this as me trying to help you, not as me trying to offend you.
Good day.

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