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29Sakura Lisel
What does Snape mean 'PRETENDING to go to the third rate school'? Harry IS going to the other school and isn't a registered student of Hogwarts since he turned down enrollment 4 years ago thanks to Snapes snarky attitude back then, so Harry should ask/demand to know exactly WHAT is he 'pretending' when it comes to about the magic school that he IS going to that is false, that makes Snapes think he can not only order him to stop 'pretending' to go to it and go with Snape to detention like he is a student of Hogwarts who Snape can punish?
29Sakura LiselWhat does Snape mean 'PRETENDING to go to the third rate school'? Harry IS going to the other school and isn't a registered student of Hogwarts since he turned down enrollment 4 years ago thanks to Snapes snarky attitude back then, so Harry should ask/demand to know exactly WHAT is he 'pretending' when it comes to about the magic school that he IS going to that is false, that makes Snapes think he can not only order him to stop 'pretending' to go to it and go with Snape to detention like he is a student of Hogwarts who Snape can punish?
3/27/2020 c9 Dnicols01
I'm also really enjoying this story. Your FSN and HP crossovers are a lot of fun. I hope to see more soon.
I'm also really enjoying this story. Your FSN and HP crossovers are a lot of fun. I hope to see more soon.
1/25/2020 c9 Kitsune Obsessed Freak
It might have been mentioned that Snape was just keeping appearances as a spy to make it look like he hated Harry in the same book where dumbledore dies. I do vaguely remember that but it's been a very long time since I've read it
It might have been mentioned that Snape was just keeping appearances as a spy to make it look like he hated Harry in the same book where dumbledore dies. I do vaguely remember that but it's been a very long time since I've read it
1/25/2020 c5 Kitsune Obsessed Freak
You totally need to work on your spelling of certain words. Other than that it's great
You totally need to work on your spelling of certain words. Other than that it's great
1/25/2020 c4 Kitsune Obsessed Freak
If you would have used archer's hair, I would have asked if you want him to have sword shaped spells. Because that's the most likely result, lol
If you would have used archer's hair, I would have asked if you want him to have sword shaped spells. Because that's the most likely result, lol
1/25/2020 c1 Kitsune Obsessed Freak
You should have seen my reaction the moment I saw the word "fox ". I was just yelling "YES! YYEEEEES! FOXY WAIFU GET!"
Let it be known I was at my friends house when I was reading this... I thought it was the best thing I saw all day, and I saw lots of awesome things today. Good job bro
You should have seen my reaction the moment I saw the word "fox ". I was just yelling "YES! YYEEEEES! FOXY WAIFU GET!"
Let it be known I was at my friends house when I was reading this... I thought it was the best thing I saw all day, and I saw lots of awesome things today. Good job bro
11/10/2019 c9 Guest
This is quite good :)
This is quite good :)
11/4/2019 c8 Aetherium21
The plot had potential but it’s too shallow and rushed to be of much quality
The plot had potential but it’s too shallow and rushed to be of much quality
10/25/2019 c6 Autismguy593
I like it, but it's karkaroff, not kirchirov, not much a stickler on grammar, but felt I should point it out.
I like it, but it's karkaroff, not kirchirov, not much a stickler on grammar, but felt I should point it out.