for The legal intern2/18/2018 c12 Guest
You are freaking out of your mind. Won’t keep reading. Just crazy
You are freaking out of your mind. Won’t keep reading. Just crazy
2/18/2018 c1 Guest
No no no not Booth and Lilly having sex. Was really not wanting that to happen.
No no no not Booth and Lilly having sex. Was really not wanting that to happen.
12/11/2017 c11 kareneb
I noticed your word and when I read it I was wondering about it. In fact, I stopped for a minute to figure it out. I figured out it was a word and the meaning fit in well with the story...it fit! Anyway I am anxious for the next chapter. I would like to see how things work out...
I noticed your word and when I read it I was wondering about it. In fact, I stopped for a minute to figure it out. I figured out it was a word and the meaning fit in well with the story...it fit! Anyway I am anxious for the next chapter. I would like to see how things work out...
11/10/2017 c10 kareneb
Good chapter, she really got him! What a bastard. I just don't want her after Booth even if he doesn't respond. She seems to be the kind of person that might play up to a guy if she is interested.
Good chapter, she really got him! What a bastard. I just don't want her after Booth even if he doesn't respond. She seems to be the kind of person that might play up to a guy if she is interested.
9/10/2017 c9 kareneb
I do like your chapter but you are not putting Booth and Lily together are you. Did you steal my idea? I hope not Booth can be such a fool. Again I am enjoying your story and this is a good chapter.
I do like your chapter but you are not putting Booth and Lily together are you. Did you steal my idea? I hope not Booth can be such a fool. Again I am enjoying your story and this is a good chapter.
9/10/2017 c9 
8IHEARTSEELEYJBOOTH
I'm really confused as to the purpose of Lily. I don't know if she and Booth are flirting and will eventually hook up, I know in a previous chapter she told him she can help him out when he she told him he needed a rebound lay. But then I thought maybe she had eyes on Sweets then Wendell Like I said I'm really confused. What's the deal with Booth and Bones why can't they get their act together? I hope your not planning on paring him up with someone else when Bones had to suffer watching him with Hannah for all those months!
8IHEARTSEELEYJBOOTHI'm really confused as to the purpose of Lily. I don't know if she and Booth are flirting and will eventually hook up, I know in a previous chapter she told him she can help him out when he she told him he needed a rebound lay. But then I thought maybe she had eyes on Sweets then Wendell Like I said I'm really confused. What's the deal with Booth and Bones why can't they get their act together? I hope your not planning on paring him up with someone else when Bones had to suffer watching him with Hannah for all those months!
9/10/2017 c9 Guest
Ummm it kinda seems like Lilly and booth are flirting...? B&b all the way please! Lol
Ummm it kinda seems like Lilly and booth are flirting...? B&b all the way please! Lol
8/28/2017 c7 5F.H. Blake
You really captured Daisy and Wendell very well. They're in character and I couldn't have written them better myself. Your writing is amazing . I enjoy Lilly and Hodgins together. Maybe they should do an experiment..? Food for thought...
5F.H. BlakeYou really captured Daisy and Wendell very well. They're in character and I couldn't have written them better myself. Your writing is amazing . I enjoy Lilly and Hodgins together. Maybe they should do an experiment..? Food for thought...
8/27/2017 c8 kareneb
This is a good chapter but it talked a lot about Lily. My first inclination was that she was going after Booth. But then something comes up to make me feel like that is not likely. It seems that there isn't much information in this last chapter. I am getting anxious for the next chapters.
This is a good chapter but it talked a lot about Lily. My first inclination was that she was going after Booth. But then something comes up to make me feel like that is not likely. It seems that there isn't much information in this last chapter. I am getting anxious for the next chapters.
8/22/2017 c6 kareneb
so sorry I sent the review before it was ready. I was trying to tell you that you did a good job holding the readers attention. I am anxious for the next chapters.
so sorry I sent the review before it was ready. I was trying to tell you that you did a good job holding the readers attention. I am anxious for the next chapters.
8/22/2017 c7 Guest
I just found your story and I really enjoyed reading it. I really thought you did a good job holding the
I just found your story and I really enjoyed reading it. I really thought you did a good job holding the
8/9/2017 c6 F.H. Blake
I like Lilly, I really do, but at the same time I hate her just because I know things Great chapter, as always. Nice to see Booth talking about his past and Hannah. I know it's not traditional B&B, but I'd love a scene where they get to do their thing. Gosh I just want B&B to be together! Why do you torture me so?
I like Lilly, I really do, but at the same time I hate her just because I know things Great chapter, as always. Nice to see Booth talking about his past and Hannah. I know it's not traditional B&B, but I'd love a scene where they get to do their thing. Gosh I just want B&B to be together! Why do you torture me so?
8/2/2017 c5 F.H. Blake
I finally got around to reading this properly. Busy day. Okay, so I have a few things. Firstly, you got to put in a new paragraph break every time a character speaks. At some point I did not know if Hodgins or Lily was talking. Secondly, I LOVE your writing style and voice. It is in depth and really pulls you in. You are a fantastic writer and you capture the characters really well. Even though it is AU, I feel like it's something that could have happened off screen.
I like Lilly, she is smart, fun, eager. I do however feel like she needs a little more flaws. You've made her very intelligent, beautiful and rich too. She's almost not completely real. From what I could tell she had a good upbringing, but I have found that even those who did not have messed up childhoods still have darkness. You mentioned that she lacks in the athletic department, but that's not really a character flaw. Like Hodgins' anger issues, Bones' abandonment issues, Booth's dark childhood, everyone has something dark. Give her some sadness, is what I am saying! XD.
I like the premise of the story, though I can't help but wonder what Lilly's larger role will be. Will she help Booth and Bones get together? Is there some spark between her and Sweets? Will she and Daisy have a cat fight? I eagerly await the next chapter!
I finally got around to reading this properly. Busy day. Okay, so I have a few things. Firstly, you got to put in a new paragraph break every time a character speaks. At some point I did not know if Hodgins or Lily was talking. Secondly, I LOVE your writing style and voice. It is in depth and really pulls you in. You are a fantastic writer and you capture the characters really well. Even though it is AU, I feel like it's something that could have happened off screen.
I like Lilly, she is smart, fun, eager. I do however feel like she needs a little more flaws. You've made her very intelligent, beautiful and rich too. She's almost not completely real. From what I could tell she had a good upbringing, but I have found that even those who did not have messed up childhoods still have darkness. You mentioned that she lacks in the athletic department, but that's not really a character flaw. Like Hodgins' anger issues, Bones' abandonment issues, Booth's dark childhood, everyone has something dark. Give her some sadness, is what I am saying! XD.
I like the premise of the story, though I can't help but wonder what Lilly's larger role will be. Will she help Booth and Bones get together? Is there some spark between her and Sweets? Will she and Daisy have a cat fight? I eagerly await the next chapter!
7/14/2017 c4 Monique Sampson
Poor Booth, he is still reeling from his breakup with Hannah. The memories popping up at odd times especially at work is not a good thing. He needs to get over that hump soon.
Poor Booth, he is still reeling from his breakup with Hannah. The memories popping up at odd times especially at work is not a good thing. He needs to get over that hump soon.
7/7/2017 c3 Monique Sampson
Looks like everything's working fine with the new intern. Except Dr. Sweets put his foot in his mouth with that comment about her age, but she put him in his place. She's definitely a smart one on both sides of the fence.
Looks like everything's working fine with the new intern. Except Dr. Sweets put his foot in his mouth with that comment about her age, but she put him in his place. She's definitely a smart one on both sides of the fence.