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3/27/2019 c22 VictorianEyre
omg you are spoiling us.

thank you.
3/27/2019 c21 burning like shooting stars
Great as always! I love reading your updates.
3/27/2019 c21 Guest
Two updates, well 3 if you count 7 years...ahhh! Thank you!
3/27/2019 c21 7B4C
Nawww soap
3/27/2019 c1 Twenty on the Inside
Another one! You must be working so hard on this for us.
Believe me, we really appreciate it all. I just soap how Soap has now become a word that make me feel all mushy. Soap your writing completelyNow stop reading this and get on with chapter 22! Susie
3/27/2019 c21 5Lausmiile
(Forgot to leave a comment yesterday) but oh my God this chapter is everything! It’s such a sweet moment even though what they are actually doing haha, and the whole soap thing is fantastic, I imagine Harry is going to be like guys, why are you always talking about soap? Ahhh you are such a talented writer and I freaking love this story.
3/26/2019 c21 1LillyMay77
Amazing, awesome chapter! Update again soon, excited for more!
3/26/2019 c21 2minecraftgraces
Bruh I’m in soap with this story
3/26/2019 c21 2NLAP
Very beautifully written.
3/26/2019 c21 13AccioWazlib
so, I must admit when I got the email, I was at work... I wasn't sure I was going to last the entire day without succumbing to the temptation of reading this, and alas... I failed and gave into the temptation around lunch time. With that, here is another lengthy novel on the things I loved:

First off.. Soap. soAP. SOAP! I never once imagined that the word soap could make me feel this type of emotion. I have several feelings that I have to work through, so I must apologize in advance..

A.) "He fiercely hoped she'd understand." & "Bloody hell, she understood." I LOVE THESE LINES. As if there's anything our Hermione can't understand, of course she understood. Just the idea of Ron thinking that there may be something that Hermione doesn't know, and then *always the tone of surprise* as he is proven wrong in fact, that the girl really does know everything.

B.) "I think about soap a lot too." Cue the inhuman noises. I wanted to cry happy tears and throw flower petals as I read this line, and then roll around on the floor squawking as his response was that he was so happy that he had actually done something clever. Oh Ron, you are probably one of the most clever of all.

C.) "Soap," the most beautiful I love you I have ever witnessed. I was left clutching a hand to my chest as I was hit with a tsunami of feels, to which I still have not recovered.

Now that I've vomited out all the emotions, now to the funnies.

Ron being concerned over his pants, oh my goodness. Yep, can't think of again, a more Ron thing... well actually, there is, and it's the fact that he decided that even if they were the worst pair he owned, he wasn't going to change them. Ahh yes, perfect Ron moment.

I'm not super keen on smut (well I was in my teen years), but I typically try to avoid it or skip over the really smutty parts, however the dialogue was super cute!

Also the image of Hermione in the freezing cold in just her Hogwarts skirt and knee socks was HILARIOUS to me? I have no idea why, but you'd think for someone as smart as Hermione, that she'd have a better plan, like wearing her cloak or using some sort of heating charm. Made me smirk a bit, that yes, even Hermione's plans, especially "those" type of plans, aren't always thought completely through... guess she must have a bit of a gray area where gingers are concerned LOL

Thank you for this, and so soon after your last post... I'm feeling a bit spoiled, and will have two things to re-read as I await the cuteness to return!
3/26/2019 c21 15rebelsaurus29
That was perfection. Hold my hand. And then soap. Love it!
3/26/2019 c20 rebelsaurus29
I absolutely adore this. I get butterflies lol.
3/26/2019 c21 Guest
Oh, Blue.

I soap this Ron.

shoc
3/26/2019 c21 rwong
Wow! I got to read two new chapters in a row! What a bliss! But right now it's like 2am here and reading this story surely brings consequences...
So just quickly let you know this, I love how these two silly lovebirds gradually open up themselves, and now we have a new meaning for soap, in my RL! And oh, Ron's telling of what he's gonna do for their 7th year is awesome. "I'd call you my girlfriend, even though that doesn't sound like enough of a word". That is so so true!
3/26/2019 c20 ObsessedRHShipper
So I do understand the insecurities that they have. I was surprised about how far he went and she allowed him to go in saying about their hogwarts lives, though I guess the love was truly a split. Parts of me wished he described some simpler things like holding her hand or asking her to a dance. I also guess she validated him by continuing with the room of requirement talk, though i wish she also elaborated on the non-room of requirement vision of 7th year.

Definitely curious if the next chapter will truly resolve the build up or not.
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