for Second Chances6/25/2018 c1 Kittykat-ay
I saw a sparked between them too especially whe jackson slams cruz in the wall, lol literally.
I saw a sparked between them too especially whe jackson slams cruz in the wall, lol literally.
4/16/2018 c1 Isabelle Holtorf
I read your article and I like it. Since I like romance or see a love relationship when you'll be do on the next chapter ? I really want to read the next one. You'll know when it's finished.
I read your article and I like it. Since I like romance or see a love relationship when you'll be do on the next chapter ? I really want to read the next one. You'll know when it's finished.
2/27/2018 c1 Gamora22
Are you ganna do Peter's little girl 3 ' cause I cant wait anymore! I luv your work. Great story!
Are you ganna do Peter's little girl 3 ' cause I cant wait anymore! I luv your work. Great story!
2/19/2018 c1 Ferry Nikolai
You should seriously write more of these...this is beautiful. That is all I have to say.
You should seriously write more of these...this is beautiful. That is all I have to say.
7/16/2017 c1 
6Race the Derp
I love this so much! Ahhh! the story suits Jackson's personality a lot, I mean he has to have some sort of emotion right? And I kinda maybe ship them as well
6Race the DerpI love this so much! Ahhh! the story suits Jackson's personality a lot, I mean he has to have some sort of emotion right? And I kinda maybe ship them as well
7/10/2017 c1 Guest
This is great! I'd like to see Storm go to Radiator Springs maybe?
This is great! I'd like to see Storm go to Radiator Springs maybe?
7/2/2017 c1 5ninjachief547
Oh my goodness... This was so great! I just love Jackson Storm in this! His character is well-balanced here, something I felt as if the movie didn't even make the effort to go over. "Oh, he's just arrogant and that's that." No, it didn't seem like that here. It seemed like he actually had emotions in this fanfiction, to which I greatly admire.
Excellent job, and I look forward to seeing more of your work (hopefully) soon and containing lots of Jackson Storm. ;)
~NinjaChief547
5ninjachief547Oh my goodness... This was so great! I just love Jackson Storm in this! His character is well-balanced here, something I felt as if the movie didn't even make the effort to go over. "Oh, he's just arrogant and that's that." No, it didn't seem like that here. It seemed like he actually had emotions in this fanfiction, to which I greatly admire.
Excellent job, and I look forward to seeing more of your work (hopefully) soon and containing lots of Jackson Storm. ;)
~NinjaChief547
7/1/2017 c1 Gnomegirl95
Wow im glad im not the only one who ships those two. Great job on the story, you should do more cute fics of them. Keep up the good work.
Wow im glad im not the only one who ships those two. Great job on the story, you should do more cute fics of them. Keep up the good work.
7/1/2017 c1 78922154933
Ship Name: Jacruz or Stormirez! I know, sounds weird but hey, ship names gotta start somewhere.
Ship Name: Jacruz or Stormirez! I know, sounds weird but hey, ship names gotta start somewhere.
6/26/2017 c1 TheCraZ1
Loved this fic! (Glad I'm not the only one who ships Cruz/Jackson XD) You're an amazing writer, keep up the good work!
Loved this fic! (Glad I'm not the only one who ships Cruz/Jackson XD) You're an amazing writer, keep up the good work!
6/25/2017 c1 20C-130
You totally nailed the characters on this one. I can totally see Lightning doing that and it was nice to see Jackson Storm a bit more rounded out. Great job.
20C-130You totally nailed the characters on this one. I can totally see Lightning doing that and it was nice to see Jackson Storm a bit more rounded out. Great job.
6/24/2017 c1 6OnewAyOnly
YES! I'm not the only one who felt this way about the movie! Thank you for beautifully writing that!
6OnewAyOnlyYES! I'm not the only one who felt this way about the movie! Thank you for beautifully writing that!
6/24/2017 c1 lynnajens21
Ohmygod!
Love this story so much. Can you do some more oneshots with these two please. I adore this ship so much. Maybe you could do seasonal oneshots as well as the normal ones like first date and kiss and whatnot.
Ohmygod!
Love this story so much. Can you do some more oneshots with these two please. I adore this ship so much. Maybe you could do seasonal oneshots as well as the normal ones like first date and kiss and whatnot.