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11Haku's Lover18
Thank you for nor giving up this awesome story! I noticed a few errors in this chapter, Rickard instead of Rickon for the youngest Stark child’s name mainly. I had to reread the whole fic as it had been so long but i enjoyed it as much still. I can’t wait for more!
11Haku's Lover18Thank you for nor giving up this awesome story! I noticed a few errors in this chapter, Rickard instead of Rickon for the youngest Stark child’s name mainly. I had to reread the whole fic as it had been so long but i enjoyed it as much still. I can’t wait for more!
5/19 c60 Taha anwar
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5/19 c10 ZiggyHoltz
so far one of the better stories ive read in months. being a great cross over idea and at an excellent pace. if i had one minor constructive criticism it would be your vocab. you very rarely use what i feel to be the wrong descriptors for the setting. for example in this chapter you had mormont use the word office, when you should of used solar or perhaps study.
so far one of the better stories ive read in months. being a great cross over idea and at an excellent pace. if i had one minor constructive criticism it would be your vocab. you very rarely use what i feel to be the wrong descriptors for the setting. for example in this chapter you had mormont use the word office, when you should of used solar or perhaps study.
5/9 c60 Guest
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5/9 c60 1Mastermind4892
WELCOME BACK! Sorry it took me a few days before I could read and review! But please, don't trouble yourself. As much as your loyal readers, like me, crave your storywriting, your daily life is never any less important! Nevertheless, I would be a liar if I said I hope the next chapter comes sooner rather than later!
It's good to see a chapter largely dedicated Jon Snow and the rest of the Starks! So much has changed now! Jon has returned to his brothers in the Watch triumphant and bearing critical news. And now he has dispatched that despicable traitor and won his first clash with the White Walkers themselves!
Eldritch horrors are stirring across Westeros. The icy dead far to the North, and the hags in the Riverlands. Soon, this will grow beyond our petty disputes, righteous or foolhardy they may be. The good news is that Brann is now fully aware, and word can be delivered to Winterfell. The Starks have just found each other, and they will not be caught off guard!
1Mastermind4892WELCOME BACK! Sorry it took me a few days before I could read and review! But please, don't trouble yourself. As much as your loyal readers, like me, crave your storywriting, your daily life is never any less important! Nevertheless, I would be a liar if I said I hope the next chapter comes sooner rather than later!
It's good to see a chapter largely dedicated Jon Snow and the rest of the Starks! So much has changed now! Jon has returned to his brothers in the Watch triumphant and bearing critical news. And now he has dispatched that despicable traitor and won his first clash with the White Walkers themselves!
Eldritch horrors are stirring across Westeros. The icy dead far to the North, and the hags in the Riverlands. Soon, this will grow beyond our petty disputes, righteous or foolhardy they may be. The good news is that Brann is now fully aware, and word can be delivered to Winterfell. The Starks have just found each other, and they will not be caught off guard!
5/5 c13 Guest
I hope one day you'll fix every spelling and grammatical errors. Trust me it's very jarring to read fictions with tons of errors in grammar and spellings.
I hope one day you'll fix every spelling and grammatical errors. Trust me it's very jarring to read fictions with tons of errors in grammar and spellings.
5/6 c60 1W8W
Welcome back.
Solid chapter. Looks like Brann will not be meeting Three eyed raven in person and receive teachings in Winterfell.
Only small changes for Jon so far but we can already see that things will be going in different direction.
Nice reference to Geralt teachings. It is nice to know that he is still faster than WW.
With how Brann witness fight he will likely be sending extra aid.
It will be nice to check up on Cir and Dany.
1W8WWelcome back.
Solid chapter. Looks like Brann will not be meeting Three eyed raven in person and receive teachings in Winterfell.
Only small changes for Jon so far but we can already see that things will be going in different direction.
Nice reference to Geralt teachings. It is nice to know that he is still faster than WW.
With how Brann witness fight he will likely be sending extra aid.
It will be nice to check up on Cir and Dany.
5/6 c60 rivia10
It's been a while, but as always, it's really nice to see a new chapter with two interesting stories. Bran/Arya's part of the story is one of the parts I'm most looking forward to, so I'm really pleased to see that it's starting now. The meeting between the young Starks and the young Reeds was nice, right away Arya wants learning from Meera and finding them both likeable. I'm sure they'll both become good friends. And how Bran takes his first steps to learn his abilities and his big role in all of this. (It's also nice to know that Jojen knows about the Crones; it's always nice to see what such magical characters know about each other.) I'm very happy about how this will continue, very exciting for me personally. Jon's return was well told with a reasonable pace. Of course, whatever plan Jon has, he has to move forward rather slowly. The most important thing is that he is not seen as a traitor, which he has definitely done better than in the series. At the same time, however, he has already hinted that it is not enough to just defeat the wildlings and that there must be another solution. I am excited to see how Jon's plan develops. I was surprised at how much action we had and I did not expect the traitors to be defeated in this chapter, even less did I expect the army of the dead. Another surprise for me was how quickly Karl was killed, but it was fitting in an unexpected way. Since Jon's mistake in the series was fighting too honorably, it was a perfect way to show his character development here, as he makes short work of things and simply uses the effective method of killing Karl. The final battle against the White Walker showed me what I wanted to see from this type of enemy. I've said before that I hope a White Walker remains a difficult opponent even when perfectly armed. The comparisons to Geralt's speed and the fact that Jon would have been defeated here even with his Valyrian steel sword if he hadn't had any help showed well that this is the case, and no matter how well prepared the characters are, only the very best fighters will stand a chance. I like it a lot. Overall, a very solid chapter. I'm really looking forward to seeing Ciri back in action after a long time.
It's been a while, but as always, it's really nice to see a new chapter with two interesting stories. Bran/Arya's part of the story is one of the parts I'm most looking forward to, so I'm really pleased to see that it's starting now. The meeting between the young Starks and the young Reeds was nice, right away Arya wants learning from Meera and finding them both likeable. I'm sure they'll both become good friends. And how Bran takes his first steps to learn his abilities and his big role in all of this. (It's also nice to know that Jojen knows about the Crones; it's always nice to see what such magical characters know about each other.) I'm very happy about how this will continue, very exciting for me personally. Jon's return was well told with a reasonable pace. Of course, whatever plan Jon has, he has to move forward rather slowly. The most important thing is that he is not seen as a traitor, which he has definitely done better than in the series. At the same time, however, he has already hinted that it is not enough to just defeat the wildlings and that there must be another solution. I am excited to see how Jon's plan develops. I was surprised at how much action we had and I did not expect the traitors to be defeated in this chapter, even less did I expect the army of the dead. Another surprise for me was how quickly Karl was killed, but it was fitting in an unexpected way. Since Jon's mistake in the series was fighting too honorably, it was a perfect way to show his character development here, as he makes short work of things and simply uses the effective method of killing Karl. The final battle against the White Walker showed me what I wanted to see from this type of enemy. I've said before that I hope a White Walker remains a difficult opponent even when perfectly armed. The comparisons to Geralt's speed and the fact that Jon would have been defeated here even with his Valyrian steel sword if he hadn't had any help showed well that this is the case, and no matter how well prepared the characters are, only the very best fighters will stand a chance. I like it a lot. Overall, a very solid chapter. I'm really looking forward to seeing Ciri back in action after a long time.
5/5 c60 doa570047
Glad to hear that you're doing okay. It actually came to a shock to me as I was actually rereading this fic as it was updated. Maybe I should start rereading other fics on hiatus to bring the authors back.
Glad to hear that you're doing okay. It actually came to a shock to me as I was actually rereading this fic as it was updated. Maybe I should start rereading other fics on hiatus to bring the authors back.