5/10 c4 angelthegodslayer
got 2 chapter 4, and dropped it, cant stand bad writers nerfing characters instead of trying to think of something to counter them. sad
got 2 chapter 4, and dropped it, cant stand bad writers nerfing characters instead of trying to think of something to counter them. sad
5/10 c59 1Bromega2477
Worth the wait, my friend!
Sorry to hear about everything. Believe me, I've been where you are and things WILL turn around eventually. The waiting is always the worst part.
Worth the wait, my friend!
Sorry to hear about everything. Believe me, I've been where you are and things WILL turn around eventually. The waiting is always the worst part.
5/10 c59 58Angry lil' elf
Good chapter, I've been waiting opn this one for a while. I'm sorry to hear about your grandmother and your aunt's mother; just last year I lost my uncle after his cancer came back to haunt him, so I know the feeling of losing a beloved family member. Still, all in all, this was a good chapter.
I liked that Danaerys is possibly forgoing the idea of taking the Iron Throne, I think that was her biggest downfall in the show (books are still up for debate), when she spoke of breaking the wheel she didn't actually break or even stop it, she kept it spinning by trying for the Throne, so it seems in your story you're having Dany break the wheel by not going for the Iron Throne so that's pretty good in my book :-)
And just to let you know, I recently wrote another GoT/Witcher crossover I labelled The Witcher's Apprentice; it follows Aegon VI/Young Griff finding himself in the Witcher world and becoming Geralt's apprentice. The story takes places roughly after season 1 with the Golden Company hosting a squire's tourney which Aegon takes part in and wins, then while washing up in his tent, Ciri appears out of nowhere and they chat for a moment before the Wild Hunt shows up looking for her. Aegon helps Ciri to escape the camp but they're both cornered by the Hunt.
Ciri then grabs Egg and teleports them out of there, but something goes wrong as it always does and Egg lands in Velen where he is wounded and captured by a gang of deserters/bandits but soon after his rescued by none other than Geralt of Rivia himself who learns that Egg had met Ciri and is from another world. Sorry for the novel length exposition, but you get the idea. And if it isn't too much trouble, would you mind giving my story a read? I've only done two chapters so far, but it appears to be well received although I'm certainly not the best writer out there :-/
Anyways, good chapter, I look forward to seeing more soon :-)
Good chapter, I've been waiting opn this one for a while. I'm sorry to hear about your grandmother and your aunt's mother; just last year I lost my uncle after his cancer came back to haunt him, so I know the feeling of losing a beloved family member. Still, all in all, this was a good chapter.
I liked that Danaerys is possibly forgoing the idea of taking the Iron Throne, I think that was her biggest downfall in the show (books are still up for debate), when she spoke of breaking the wheel she didn't actually break or even stop it, she kept it spinning by trying for the Throne, so it seems in your story you're having Dany break the wheel by not going for the Iron Throne so that's pretty good in my book :-)
And just to let you know, I recently wrote another GoT/Witcher crossover I labelled The Witcher's Apprentice; it follows Aegon VI/Young Griff finding himself in the Witcher world and becoming Geralt's apprentice. The story takes places roughly after season 1 with the Golden Company hosting a squire's tourney which Aegon takes part in and wins, then while washing up in his tent, Ciri appears out of nowhere and they chat for a moment before the Wild Hunt shows up looking for her. Aegon helps Ciri to escape the camp but they're both cornered by the Hunt.
Ciri then grabs Egg and teleports them out of there, but something goes wrong as it always does and Egg lands in Velen where he is wounded and captured by a gang of deserters/bandits but soon after his rescued by none other than Geralt of Rivia himself who learns that Egg had met Ciri and is from another world. Sorry for the novel length exposition, but you get the idea. And if it isn't too much trouble, would you mind giving my story a read? I've only done two chapters so far, but it appears to be well received although I'm certainly not the best writer out there :-/
Anyways, good chapter, I look forward to seeing more soon :-)
5/10 c58 13IS6A6E
Glad we see what's going on with Jon. Hope he brings Peace between the Wall and Free Folk. Can't wait for his reunion with Geralt, and for the Free Folk to meet the White Wolf.
Glad we see what's going on with Jon. Hope he brings Peace between the Wall and Free Folk. Can't wait for his reunion with Geralt, and for the Free Folk to meet the White Wolf.
5/10 c59 KingInTheSouth
I havent even read it yet but want to say yipee that you posted again lol i love this story
I havent even read it yet but want to say yipee that you posted again lol i love this story
5/5 c21 kukuhimanpr
gotta say, geralt is getting really sloppy with his danger sense when he offers the OBVIOUSLY SPIKED wine to robert. considering that he recently hear lancel admitting of trying to get robert heavily drunk in his hunt, and also witnessing jaime becoming very wary of him after geralt force him to admit his part in bran's crippling, and knowing the entire time that cersei is 24 7 planning to kill geralt and robert through every means she can afford.
i guess i'd bluntly say this is the most disappointing ooc moment for geralt in this fic. still, most part of this fic is great so i'm not gonna be too bothered by that
gotta say, geralt is getting really sloppy with his danger sense when he offers the OBVIOUSLY SPIKED wine to robert. considering that he recently hear lancel admitting of trying to get robert heavily drunk in his hunt, and also witnessing jaime becoming very wary of him after geralt force him to admit his part in bran's crippling, and knowing the entire time that cersei is 24 7 planning to kill geralt and robert through every means she can afford.
i guess i'd bluntly say this is the most disappointing ooc moment for geralt in this fic. still, most part of this fic is great so i'm not gonna be too bothered by that
3/8 c58 BrutusPrimus
Took a few days, but I'm caught up fully with this story, now. Hope you continue it, this is one of the better Fanfic's out there.
Took a few days, but I'm caught up fully with this story, now. Hope you continue it, this is one of the better Fanfic's out there.
1/1 c15 Blue-Happens
wTF. he told the seperate worlds thing to some random smith? especially in kings landing of all places? no. i refuse.
wTF. he told the seperate worlds thing to some random smith? especially in kings landing of all places? no. i refuse.
1/1 c12 Blue-Happens
it kind of fits here, but these kind of stories always work smoother when 1 character is crossed over, alone.
all these extra points of contact between the og stories causes friction, making the internal consistency shakier. be careful
it kind of fits here, but these kind of stories always work smoother when 1 character is crossed over, alone.
all these extra points of contact between the og stories causes friction, making the internal consistency shakier. be careful
1/1 c3 Blue-Happens
i understand the need for context between the characters, but small peeve is that geralt is so willing to tell his whole story to strangers.
its not a huge thing, i am enjoying he story reguardless
i understand the need for context between the characters, but small peeve is that geralt is so willing to tell his whole story to strangers.
its not a huge thing, i am enjoying he story reguardless
12/18/2023 c26 19nagiten
the warlocks i imagine scryed ciri , so marcus is a grim?
gendry has the notebook and what a place to have it. geralt may yet find the tunnel .
so will siyro and barristan go east together? they are looking for the same person now after all technically
the warlocks i imagine scryed ciri , so marcus is a grim?
gendry has the notebook and what a place to have it. geralt may yet find the tunnel .
so will siyro and barristan go east together? they are looking for the same person now after all technically
12/18/2023 c23 nagiten
so tobho gavr grendy his secret book? oh whoa, so geralt has mosr of his stuff hmm good, poor ned now geralt knows but doesnt know. and he'd see tempting in the throne room?. so magic back geralt suffering and adapting and ciri is what with dany? well why not cant ask for a better defender
so tobho gavr grendy his secret book? oh whoa, so geralt has mosr of his stuff hmm good, poor ned now geralt knows but doesnt know. and he'd see tempting in the throne room?. so magic back geralt suffering and adapting and ciri is what with dany? well why not cant ask for a better defender
12/18/2023 c22 nagiten
well fuck. wheres the wandering crow? isnt here meant to be here somewhere? and i hope many of the lannisters mess with geralt thinks and pay the price.
well fuck. wheres the wandering crow? isnt here meant to be here somewhere? and i hope many of the lannisters mess with geralt thinks and pay the price.