for A Rather Cunning Muggle-Born1/22 c22 TheSpazzer77
This is honestly great, I hope you continue this!
Amazing job, can't wait for more:)
This is honestly great, I hope you continue this!
Amazing job, can't wait for more:)
11/12/2020 c22 
2AngelaLove072101
Oh my goodness, I absolutely love this variation! I do hope you decide to keep writing, it’s a very good story!
2AngelaLove072101Oh my goodness, I absolutely love this variation! I do hope you decide to keep writing, it’s a very good story!
10/17/2020 c22 Inuclaw
I like the fact that you made the twins slyderins I always did imagine them as such!
I like the fact that you made the twins slyderins I always did imagine them as such!
9/27/2020 c22 2nate-king
[Hermione hadn't forgotten Madam Hooch's warning, that anyone caught flying would be expelled...
...
She swung her leg over the broom and positioned herself behind Harry. "No more talking. Shall we get that little weasel?"]
I've read so many takes on this fight between Harry and Draco, but never have I seen one quite like this! (Never a Hermione mounting on Harry's broom!) And it's only, what? The first year? Truly genius! And that twist about Marcus and Slytherin is radically brilliant as well! Only I hope it isn't truly Salazar (it would make sense for Marcus to give her such a dream but ah, well).
This was a beautiful story, author! Thank you!
2nate-king[Hermione hadn't forgotten Madam Hooch's warning, that anyone caught flying would be expelled...
...
She swung her leg over the broom and positioned herself behind Harry. "No more talking. Shall we get that little weasel?"]
I've read so many takes on this fight between Harry and Draco, but never have I seen one quite like this! (Never a Hermione mounting on Harry's broom!) And it's only, what? The first year? Truly genius! And that twist about Marcus and Slytherin is radically brilliant as well! Only I hope it isn't truly Salazar (it would make sense for Marcus to give her such a dream but ah, well).
This was a beautiful story, author! Thank you!
9/17/2020 c22 10stevem1
This is a very different and enjoyable AU. A lot of canon is turned on it’s head.
10stevem1This is a very different and enjoyable AU. A lot of canon is turned on it’s head.
9/11/2020 c22 SereniteRose
good on Hermione , Malfoy is an ass-hole douche bag, anyway loving the whole chapter and story, thanks ever somuch.
good on Hermione , Malfoy is an ass-hole douche bag, anyway loving the whole chapter and story, thanks ever somuch.
9/11/2020 c22 BillP
Hermione getting on Harry's broom makes no sense to me.
It will make the broom slower and harder to manoeuvrer, for what gain?
Hermione getting on Harry's broom makes no sense to me.
It will make the broom slower and harder to manoeuvrer, for what gain?
9/10/2020 c22 Guest
Can’t wait to read more! I wonder what difference it’ll make with Hermione on the broom...
Can’t wait to read more! I wonder what difference it’ll make with Hermione on the broom...
9/10/2020 c22 ironhair
Thanks for the latest update. Please do end this story arc, it's fun so far :)
Thanks for the latest update. Please do end this story arc, it's fun so far :)
9/10/2020 c1 IronHair
Rereading
Rereading