for A Frozen Heart11/15/2020 c1 Etro champion
you need to make more of the story is beautiful and said I look forward to seeing an extended version of this if you want ideas to help expand your story let me know and the reason I think the story could use so much don't be afraid to use Canna Source material and because a lot of fanfiction writers have a tendency lose the story because he try to be too alternate universe a combined Canon Source material which original story and you'll be surprised what you guys can do I hope you're safe and well in his age of the coronavirus 19 and thank you for your story I hope to see more of this and don't listen to any dick heads to give you a hard time they just jealous you don't have the talent for writing
you need to make more of the story is beautiful and said I look forward to seeing an extended version of this if you want ideas to help expand your story let me know and the reason I think the story could use so much don't be afraid to use Canna Source material and because a lot of fanfiction writers have a tendency lose the story because he try to be too alternate universe a combined Canon Source material which original story and you'll be surprised what you guys can do I hope you're safe and well in his age of the coronavirus 19 and thank you for your story I hope to see more of this and don't listen to any dick heads to give you a hard time they just jealous you don't have the talent for writing
11/7/2020 c9 Guest
Finish this story please
Finish this story please
9/17/2020 c9 Guest
Cadê a o resto porra
Cadê a o resto porra
8/28/2020 c9 
1Monkeymandb
its a shame you never intend to finish this story, its fun to read and is well thought out.
1Monkeymandbits a shame you never intend to finish this story, its fun to read and is well thought out.
8/3/2020 c8 Guest
i hope you torture sandaime than gara
i hope you torture sandaime than gara
7/14/2020 c1 Guest
Bro i legit never cry from sad things i can cringe yea but no crying unless someone close to me dies
Bro i legit never cry from sad things i can cringe yea but no crying unless someone close to me dies
6/30/2020 c6 Guest
Dude im south african as well this is awesome #zuma the loser
Dude im south african as well this is awesome #zuma the loser
5/26/2020 c9 Guest
Hope you continue this during the quarantin.
Hope you continue this during the quarantin.
4/29/2020 c9 Guest
Bro keep this going
Bro keep this going