for A New Start6/29/2017 c1 Acerak
An interesting, almost disorienting, start. A lot of characters seem OOC. There is no way Konoha would let Naruto out, but as you've made clear, this is your premise. I'm curious to see how this goes, there's no fanon on how Yagura would be characterized, so you hold the freedom to do it you own way.
An interesting, almost disorienting, start. A lot of characters seem OOC. There is no way Konoha would let Naruto out, but as you've made clear, this is your premise. I'm curious to see how this goes, there's no fanon on how Yagura would be characterized, so you hold the freedom to do it you own way.
6/26/2017 c1 thor94
look interesting.
so yagura taken naruto and impersonated a kiri genin (thks his teen look) wanting become mizukage (even if he is already it).
This story kinda look like "a new beginning" where naruto is taken by yagura after the blonde being hunted out of konoha by shinobi during one of the usual fox hunt.
would like naruto having alove relationship with yagura here.
look interesting.
so yagura taken naruto and impersonated a kiri genin (thks his teen look) wanting become mizukage (even if he is already it).
This story kinda look like "a new beginning" where naruto is taken by yagura after the blonde being hunted out of konoha by shinobi during one of the usual fox hunt.
would like naruto having alove relationship with yagura here.
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