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8bikerboy
Welp, he's gone insane a little bit. But yeah this looks good, see you in chapter 5.
8bikerboyWelp, he's gone insane a little bit. But yeah this looks good, see you in chapter 5.
8/22/2017 c3 Guest
I love this story, and I cannot wait for the next chapter!
I love this story, and I cannot wait for the next chapter!
8/22/2017 c3 bikerboy
1.)This is cool.
2.)How is this humphrey's fault?
3.)Garth, you really think that's it don't you?
4.)See you in chapter 4.
1.)This is cool.
2.)How is this humphrey's fault?
3.)Garth, you really think that's it don't you?
4.)See you in chapter 4.
8/20/2017 c2 118degrees
I like this story so far. The story line and detail is magnificent, keep it up :D
-ItzJoshx
118degreesI like this story so far. The story line and detail is magnificent, keep it up :D
-ItzJoshx
7/1/2017 c1 4slenderisbeast
I cannot wait to see where this story goes! Excited! You're a very talented writer, my friend.
4slenderisbeastI cannot wait to see where this story goes! Excited! You're a very talented writer, my friend.
6/29/2017 c1 31DogDrawler
I'm glad you are one of the few authors writing better written material, and I find the idea of what would happen if the pack leaders were actually trampled unlike the first film very very original. Unfortunately, of course, your writing style is far from perfect. What's being said is good, but how the sentences, words, and paragraphs are flowing together is a little choppy. Make sure you use transitional tools correctly because that can enhanced your writing, and it won't distract people from your story. It came close to do that for me. Nonetheless the story is solid and I'm interested in seeing what else is up your sleeve. Thank you and have a good day :)
31DogDrawlerI'm glad you are one of the few authors writing better written material, and I find the idea of what would happen if the pack leaders were actually trampled unlike the first film very very original. Unfortunately, of course, your writing style is far from perfect. What's being said is good, but how the sentences, words, and paragraphs are flowing together is a little choppy. Make sure you use transitional tools correctly because that can enhanced your writing, and it won't distract people from your story. It came close to do that for me. Nonetheless the story is solid and I'm interested in seeing what else is up your sleeve. Thank you and have a good day :)
6/26/2017 c1 Guest
Another great story. Really hope our favorite couple ends up together.
Another great story. Really hope our favorite couple ends up together.