for Breathing Just A Little1/30/2020 c9 Guest
Poor Brook ,but at least he found happiness again,all he needs now is Laboon
Poor Brook ,but at least he found happiness again,all he needs now is Laboon
1/30/2020 c8 Guest
What can I say , but, thanks for this chapter,so good, so many feelings and so well written.
What can I say , but, thanks for this chapter,so good, so many feelings and so well written.
1/30/2020 c7 Guest
Was not expecting Sengoku, but it was really interesting to read his thoughts , I think you nailed it , it’s not what he stands for , him Garp and Tsuru joined the marines to help the world,only to realise they work for the biggest criminals on it.
Was not expecting Sengoku, but it was really interesting to read his thoughts , I think you nailed it , it’s not what he stands for , him Garp and Tsuru joined the marines to help the world,only to realise they work for the biggest criminals on it.
1/30/2020 c2 Guest
Sanji ruined this chapter
Sanji ruined this chapter
1/30/2020 c1 Guest
Because luffy is sunshine , that broke me , such a simple but powerful message, loved it !
Because luffy is sunshine , that broke me , such a simple but powerful message, loved it !
2/5/2018 c15 
3ShamelessDelusion27
Oh my, I think I'm going to faint from the magnificence of this chapter. Amazing, I applaud you, I had an absolutely wonderful time reading this entire story. Thank you so much for writing this GLORIOUS story.
3ShamelessDelusion27Oh my, I think I'm going to faint from the magnificence of this chapter. Amazing, I applaud you, I had an absolutely wonderful time reading this entire story. Thank you so much for writing this GLORIOUS story.
1/30/2018 c13 ShamelessDelusion27
Last one for now, teehee. Throughout this whole story, you've made stunning work. Congratulations awesome-san
Last one for now, teehee. Throughout this whole story, you've made stunning work. Congratulations awesome-san
1/30/2018 c11 ShamelessDelusion27
Geez do I hate idiotic people who are cruel to others. Marvelous work if I do say so myself
Geez do I hate idiotic people who are cruel to others. Marvelous work if I do say so myself
1/30/2018 c8 ShamelessDelusion27
By the way, I keep seeing what you put on top, how it isn't yours, so I know it's not but still, this truly is positively beautiful
By the way, I keep seeing what you put on top, how it isn't yours, so I know it's not but still, this truly is positively beautiful
1/30/2018 c7 ShamelessDelusion27
The Government in One Piece really is crap, I feel sorry for those good guys stuck as marines. Wonderful chapter by the way. (P.S. Even if you are tired, I'm not going to stop. MWAHAHAHA!)
The Government in One Piece really is crap, I feel sorry for those good guys stuck as marines. Wonderful chapter by the way. (P.S. Even if you are tired, I'm not going to stop. MWAHAHAHA!)
1/30/2018 c6 ShamelessDelusion27
Ah Nami... Brook... Well, besides that this is an awesome chapter. (P.S. Are you getting tired of seeing reviews from me?)
Ah Nami... Brook... Well, besides that this is an awesome chapter. (P.S. Are you getting tired of seeing reviews from me?)
1/30/2018 c5 ShamelessDelusion27
I absolutely adore the friendship between Zoro and Luffy. Chapter was incredible, but I'm sure you already know that
I absolutely adore the friendship between Zoro and Luffy. Chapter was incredible, but I'm sure you already know that
1/30/2018 c4 ShamelessDelusion27
Oh Law, there's a reason you're known as the Surgeon of Death. Beautifully done
Oh Law, there's a reason you're known as the Surgeon of Death. Beautifully done