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14Hugh Takinamee
Talk to me, Audi...
I like the story. And you're right about one thing: this story showed how much you improved over the years, and you have! So, congratulations.
The story itself was nice and entertaining to read- IT FUCKING HAD ELEMENTS of 50 Shades of Grey but toned down. The sex, the love, the drive for these two- that's what I love about Duncney. No matter what, they'll always be together!
Great job! AND NOW OFF TO YOUR FIRST ITERATION!
14Hugh TakinameeTalk to me, Audi...
I like the story. And you're right about one thing: this story showed how much you improved over the years, and you have! So, congratulations.
The story itself was nice and entertaining to read- IT FUCKING HAD ELEMENTS of 50 Shades of Grey but toned down. The sex, the love, the drive for these two- that's what I love about Duncney. No matter what, they'll always be together!
Great job! AND NOW OFF TO YOUR FIRST ITERATION!