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9/6/2017 c12 Fiction Philosopher
...funny; never even existed as so much as a concept in my mind prior to reading this, but Sakura aiming for Hokage... actually a really interesting angle. Brilliant man.
*heavy wheezing from too much laughing*
...casually admitted having sex with her in front of her parents. ...balls the size of planetoids on that one... I repeat; brilliant man, just brilliant.
Nice work as always; thanks again.
9/6/2017 c12 WindyCitySlayer1
Awesome chapter
Can't wait for more
Please continue
9/6/2017 c12 Vengeful Astartes
Love this fic heaps. Really enjoyed the read. Your a great writer.
9/6/2017 c12 4KellytheKid
I love this so much!
Please continue!
9/6/2017 c12 tgms177
nice chapter i don't sakura to become hokage though
9/6/2017 c12 24thedarkpokemaster
lolo this was a very good and funny chapter as well.
9/6/2017 c12 3samuraipanda85
This chapter had my two favorite things. Comical misunderstandings and awesome sex.
PS, I love Persona 5.
9/6/2017 c1 Aevrum
Ahhhhhh, the FF app is eating my reviews! Now I have to write again... And here is the reunion.
As expected in chapter 9, because Sakura accepted her clone and everything, things went pretty fast.
And Sakura whole again with her crazy (pervert) inner, Yay!
And Sakura's thoughts about Naruto's thoughts about her clone saved a lot for me personally.
A really happy 'ending', and is it only me, or did I catch a shot there at the end during the 'confessions'?
A bit sad to read it being kinda 'finished', but looking forward to the next chapters with snippets! There are so many points to be picked up, like Hokage and Kizashi, or adult NaruSaku at the end! I wanted to write much more (also critic), but I forgot many points and FF ate my reviews, so please excuse the not detailed reviews. Just many thanks again for the story. And why doesn't it accept smileys? Arghh..!
9/6/2017 c12 Apedreitor
how many times i heard a woman telling me that? dear lord i already lost the count
9/6/2017 c12 DragonPony022
Well this is interesting to say the least. I liked the family meeting aspect of this chapter for sure. I hope we get to see them interact with the pair more. I mean Naruto ever had parents so it would be cool to see hers become more or less like new parents for him. Even with her father trying to intimidate him she comes off as much more of the goofy type like Naruto and Mebuki seem to share alot of traits with Sakura. So it would be like looking into the future. I do wonder where Naruto and Sakura are compared to power to each other. I would like to see them spare to see who is stronger, I mean Naruto should be stronger but the thing is Sakura has a HUGE unfair advantage at this moment and that is she watched and saw ALL of Naruto's training while he got to see none of hers. And to be honest I do find Sakura's motive for being Hokage to be SOO weak. I mean she want to be it because she was told he should and that is enough for her to make it her goal. Now like we said she is still young so there is a good chance her goals will change once she get more experiences in her life even more so with her motive being so weak. I just think if Naruto ends up losing out the position to her it would suck to me personally. And I just don't see her having the personality to really pull it off, hell Tsunade is really a shit hokage and she is the same as her in many ways. I think as a second in command she would be great but she hasn't shown anything that makes her stand out. I do wonder tho why is it Naruto is still a genin? I mean i figured he would have gotten the promotion for sure by now. He has to go through a whole war and end up the strongest person in the world to just reach jounin yea that seems fair lol. I think something I really want to see if Naruto and Sakura have a real fight, they are living together and lets be honest still young. So them getting into a pretty heated argument where someone could say something, we all know it would be Sakura, that would hurt the other person is very likely. So seeing that would be very interesting. I mean things can't be all fluff and perfect between those two. And Naruto wont just smile EVERYTHING away and let it all just slide off. Even he has his limits. It would be interesting if when Naruto goes to beg the A to not hunt Sasuke that in the snow instead of her telling her she loves him but this time she ends up dropping the bomb that she is prego. Man that would be huge lol.
9/6/2017 c10 Aevrum
Okay, that was... steamy, to say the least. Not that it wasn't to be expected with how the story went and it being a M-rated story.
Great to see again a glimpse of 'manipulative-playfulclone) Sakura; I don't know why, but it's just so fitting!
And man that's really sweet (but also a big chunk crazy and disturbing) what the 'real' Sakura has done for Naruto, he will clearly be overwhelmed, but happy.
But I point that constantly bugged me was: What is Naruto thinking about the real (and possibly different) Sakura in Konoha? It is not clear and a bit worrisome, but I guess it will not be of any importance and I will know more in short time, after them meeting again.
Again, a small part of me is asking itself, what would have happened if Sakura hadn't accepted her clone-self yet?
9/6/2017 c9 Aevrum
Ahhhhhh, I only got to read the chapters now, and have 4 chapters now to look forward to! Yess!
Sweet insight into Sakura's determination and familyKizashi is nearly always interesting and fun!
And also of course a bit of sweet sweet flufiness with Sakura-typical crazynessand realization of the depth of the love; for both Sakura and her clone. Interesting that you chose her to accept her clone as 'herself' so 'earlyit will surely speed things up. But at the same time I can't keep myself from wishing that there would be also a branching into a some kind of alternative timeline with more spic conflict and slower progressa reader can dream, hehe. But I will see how that will possibly affect the future chapters.
Yep, I am a little proud of myself now, as I expected Futaki to be the daughter of another Daimyo. What, it's nothing special? Don't spoil my mood!
And Futaki delivers even more confirmation and resolve for Sakura, not that she actually needed it.
9/6/2017 c12 Kurai.ningen
Keep it up and the story needs more fluff and lemons!. Oh also naruto has to be hokage no matter what :( so yeah great chapter keep it up!
9/6/2017 c12 5Shinkicker
Thus Naruto retired and became a celebrity Ramen chef, buying out Ichirakus and making it an international brand and becoming a millionaire. While Sakura was stuck on a government pay check.
9/6/2017 c12 ItsLuis21
Please continue this story, this is the greatest NaruSaku fanfic I've ever read! :)
I need more fluff and I need more lemons. Flumons?
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