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4/6/2021 c1 jellatinous
[sorry pressed enter by mistake... and wouldn't that spoil just about everything and naruto would already have kids with hinata too) but anyway. the last few chapters felt rushed. I think I needed 2-3 more fluff chapters and maybe more closure with clone Sakura. I wanted to see at least something mentioned about Hinatalike if she gets with Kiba of all people because a lot of stupid fics have that pair and they're all stupid stupidand maybe something about their hokage race.
4/6/2021 c1 jellatinous
I don't know if it's because of the title, but the fic is kinda maybe like a Taylor Swift song. But not really because Sakura didn't go thru 50 bazillion boyfriends before getting to Naruto (and would)
1/29/2021 c13 Harshil
Superb would be an understatement. Extremely well written.
12/31/2020 c13 Uncle Dork
Don't you just love reading stories that leave a smile on your face?
12/10/2020 c10 Guest
Umm...that was gross(bruh they are sixteen)
12/3/2020 c13 johnwickapencilafuckingpencil
good fic, I don't speak inglish
10/10/2020 c13 4BUFBUODA
I usually don't ship NaruSaku, but this is really good.
7/30/2020 c13 iammai1097
SHTTTTT IM BURSTING HEARTS ALL OVER MY EYESSS Thank you so much for writing this
4/4/2020 c6 Guest
I think its going fine. Theres a proper buildup and it makes sense. Not like a bunch of little kids crushing on whats flashy and cool.
3/25/2020 c2 2diecupcakes
Hi Author-sama,
I wanted to let you know about an error you made regarding the Strength of a Hundred Seal. You said the seal was the cause of Tsunade's strength. This is false - Tsunade's strength comes from exteme chakra control on her muscles. Sakura was able to harness her own chakra-enhanced strength before she gained her diamond seal; if you remember, Sakura was smashing stone walls in the beginning of Naruto Shippuden, way before the fourth ninja war when she got her seal. However, it is true that the completion of her seal that caused the diamond to appear on her forehead marked the end of her three-year-long continuous, intense chakra draining and she was finally able to use her full strength, unperturbed by continuous chakra-draining. The huge change in strength brought up the wrong conclusion for many that the seal gave her more strength, which it didn't - unless it was released, but that's another story :)
Now, I see that this story is complete and you probably don't want to go back and change anything, so it is your choice to change that little misleading sentence in chapter 2.
With that all said, I love your story so far! I'm in chapter 2 and I, as a new Sakura/Naruto fan, can't wait to read the rest!
Keep writing and stay strong, healthy, and happy,
3/21/2020 c7 2Fluffy-Akumaru
this story is a mystery and every chapter is hilarious! Freaking love this
2/24/2020 c13 A Fan
Best line, "Now let's go have Ichiraku ramen and let everybody know!". Ramen/10 would laugh again.
2/3/2020 c13 10SelenetheNerd
Okay. This was beyond perfect.
12/28/2019 c13 sasukesdoom
haha i love it, thanks for sharing!
12/27/2019 c13 4Masked Kitsune59
There where times I want to immediately leave a review, asking why their wasn't any more expansion to the day to day. I think it would've taken it from a normal, well written fan fiction. and, this is solely based on reading just one of your stories, the way you detail, the way you play it out. I believe this could've been and epic length story wise with many different twists and turns along the way. I still look forward to the marriage/kid(s) chapters. But, I will remain firm that with your premise and ability you could've taken the story into greater detail and expanses. However, this is by no means a shot at your story, I absolutely love it and you have 1000% earned the follow and favorite I'll be giving you after this comment! Wonderful story, usually I'd give you a 9/10 for that little mark in my personal rankings. But, because of how well put together it is I can't find myself giving it any less than a 9.5/10
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