for Head Space6/29/2017 c1 Bree
Yojimbra, this is a really unique and interesting idea! I really enjoyed reading this and it's so well written. Naruto is sooo sweet in his knuckle head moments and perviness. You added just the right amount of Jiraiya to the mix. His so called explanation was hilarious. lol
You have a good grasp of the characters, as well. Pleaaaasssse let there be smut and tremendous embarrassing scenarios. Let Naruto be his instinctive, sweet, sensitive yet blunt self and go after Sakura eventually. I'm definitely looking forward to future updates! Also, don't forget about the Addiction story. That is fire.
Seriously...I'll freely give you ideas for future NaruSaku stories. Really good dark fics are rare. Especially seeing a secretly unstable Naruto, because of Kyuubi's influence or his darker side just one day bleeding through. It's warping his reality and endangering his loved ones. Or have him be a charming nightmare that leaves Sakura running for the hills. The rest of Konoha thinks he's fine, but...Or the premise concerning Kyuubi/Naruto scarring Sakura for life purposely altering her Chakra. Making her more susceptible to the damaging chakra. Naruto finds more ways to corrupt her...
Or this one where Sakura wakes up after a ditch party that left Naruto in the dust. It happens after the war and everyone celebrates. This occurs in Kumo or another setting, but they take ecstasy and dance their asses off all night; ditching certain people. The party is constantly on the move. Naruto spends the night searching for Sakura who's had the time of her life (Beyonce moments and recordings) and is leaving small clues or is seen in sightings that aggravate the hell out of Naruto. He's doesn't trust her wandering around randomly in the city w/ Karui, Omoi, and company. Only to find her later in their hotel room playing it off. Basically...leading to one the most dreaded and memorable punishments ever.
Yojimbra, this is a really unique and interesting idea! I really enjoyed reading this and it's so well written. Naruto is sooo sweet in his knuckle head moments and perviness. You added just the right amount of Jiraiya to the mix. His so called explanation was hilarious. lol
You have a good grasp of the characters, as well. Pleaaaasssse let there be smut and tremendous embarrassing scenarios. Let Naruto be his instinctive, sweet, sensitive yet blunt self and go after Sakura eventually. I'm definitely looking forward to future updates! Also, don't forget about the Addiction story. That is fire.
Seriously...I'll freely give you ideas for future NaruSaku stories. Really good dark fics are rare. Especially seeing a secretly unstable Naruto, because of Kyuubi's influence or his darker side just one day bleeding through. It's warping his reality and endangering his loved ones. Or have him be a charming nightmare that leaves Sakura running for the hills. The rest of Konoha thinks he's fine, but...Or the premise concerning Kyuubi/Naruto scarring Sakura for life purposely altering her Chakra. Making her more susceptible to the damaging chakra. Naruto finds more ways to corrupt her...
Or this one where Sakura wakes up after a ditch party that left Naruto in the dust. It happens after the war and everyone celebrates. This occurs in Kumo or another setting, but they take ecstasy and dance their asses off all night; ditching certain people. The party is constantly on the move. Naruto spends the night searching for Sakura who's had the time of her life (Beyonce moments and recordings) and is leaving small clues or is seen in sightings that aggravate the hell out of Naruto. He's doesn't trust her wandering around randomly in the city w/ Karui, Omoi, and company. Only to find her later in their hotel room playing it off. Basically...leading to one the most dreaded and memorable punishments ever.
6/29/2017 c1 Guest
Kudos for a truly unique take. I wasn't entirely sure those were still possible with Naruto.
Kudos for a truly unique take. I wasn't entirely sure those were still possible with Naruto.
6/28/2017 c1 Velouria
This is awesome. It reminds me of when things were fun in Naruto (and it was always Naruto and Sakura - as it should have been in the end!). Keep up the great work!
This is awesome. It reminds me of when things were fun in Naruto (and it was always Naruto and Sakura - as it should have been in the end!). Keep up the great work!
6/29/2017 c1 DragonPony022
man this is a amazing and original story. u an in love with it and so happy it is Naruto and Sakura since I can't see any other pairing being as much of a joy to watch as these two. I hope Sakura help talk Naruto into getting the pervy sage to really train him. I mean for someone that trained with a sanin for years he came back at most mid chunin which is super weak to how he should be
man this is a amazing and original story. u an in love with it and so happy it is Naruto and Sakura since I can't see any other pairing being as much of a joy to watch as these two. I hope Sakura help talk Naruto into getting the pervy sage to really train him. I mean for someone that trained with a sanin for years he came back at most mid chunin which is super weak to how he should be
6/29/2017 c1 
4Farala
Where do you come up with all these amazing and unique prompts for your stories?! I mean are your plot bunnies on steroids or something?
4FaralaWhere do you come up with all these amazing and unique prompts for your stories?! I mean are your plot bunnies on steroids or something?
6/29/2017 c1 Random-Gaurdian
That was a fun read! Can alway use more NaruSaku stories out there! Is there any interest in writing a lemon in the future?
That was a fun read! Can alway use more NaruSaku stories out there! Is there any interest in writing a lemon in the future?
6/28/2017 c1 waldo071
I must say, I am loving all these NS ideas that you keep pulling off (not the angsty ones though, those I don't like). Any single one is impressive on its own but to keep coming up with newer ones that are even more imaginative and original is pure brilliance on your part. Kudos for that. And I like how your stories are written. Nothing feels filler. Straight action to action.
All in all, I am really, really enjoying your work and am very appreciative of you for sharing it.
I must say, I am loving all these NS ideas that you keep pulling off (not the angsty ones though, those I don't like). Any single one is impressive on its own but to keep coming up with newer ones that are even more imaginative and original is pure brilliance on your part. Kudos for that. And I like how your stories are written. Nothing feels filler. Straight action to action.
All in all, I am really, really enjoying your work and am very appreciative of you for sharing it.
6/28/2017 c1 Suzululu4moe
lol mind traveling Sakura .
If I were her I'd go see ino's dad before it isn't funny anymore. Training with surgery and poisons if she loses her mind.. then t could be fatal. Well at least Tsunade is nearby to save her ...
lol mind traveling Sakura .
If I were her I'd go see ino's dad before it isn't funny anymore. Training with surgery and poisons if she loses her mind.. then t could be fatal. Well at least Tsunade is nearby to save her ...
6/28/2017 c1 Doryu
Yes Yoji! Yes! Yes! Yes! Been waiting for this for like, uhm, two days(?). Anyway, can't wait for more.
Yes Yoji! Yes! Yes! Yes! Been waiting for this for like, uhm, two days(?). Anyway, can't wait for more.