for Head Space4/4/2020 c6 Guest
I think its going fine. Theres a proper buildup and it makes sense. Not like a bunch of little kids crushing on whats flashy and cool.
I think its going fine. Theres a proper buildup and it makes sense. Not like a bunch of little kids crushing on whats flashy and cool.
3/25/2020 c2 
2diecupcakes
Hi Author-sama,
I wanted to let you know about an error you made regarding the Strength of a Hundred Seal. You said the seal was the cause of Tsunade's strength. This is false - Tsunade's strength comes from exteme chakra control on her muscles. Sakura was able to harness her own chakra-enhanced strength before she gained her diamond seal; if you remember, Sakura was smashing stone walls in the beginning of Naruto Shippuden, way before the fourth ninja war when she got her seal. However, it is true that the completion of her seal that caused the diamond to appear on her forehead marked the end of her three-year-long continuous, intense chakra draining and she was finally able to use her full strength, unperturbed by continuous chakra-draining. The huge change in strength brought up the wrong conclusion for many that the seal gave her more strength, which it didn't - unless it was released, but that's another story :)
Now, I see that this story is complete and you probably don't want to go back and change anything, so it is your choice to change that little misleading sentence in chapter 2.
With that all said, I love your story so far! I'm in chapter 2 and I, as a new Sakura/Naruto fan, can't wait to read the rest!
Keep writing and stay strong, healthy, and happy,
-Diecupcakes
2diecupcakesHi Author-sama,
I wanted to let you know about an error you made regarding the Strength of a Hundred Seal. You said the seal was the cause of Tsunade's strength. This is false - Tsunade's strength comes from exteme chakra control on her muscles. Sakura was able to harness her own chakra-enhanced strength before she gained her diamond seal; if you remember, Sakura was smashing stone walls in the beginning of Naruto Shippuden, way before the fourth ninja war when she got her seal. However, it is true that the completion of her seal that caused the diamond to appear on her forehead marked the end of her three-year-long continuous, intense chakra draining and she was finally able to use her full strength, unperturbed by continuous chakra-draining. The huge change in strength brought up the wrong conclusion for many that the seal gave her more strength, which it didn't - unless it was released, but that's another story :)
Now, I see that this story is complete and you probably don't want to go back and change anything, so it is your choice to change that little misleading sentence in chapter 2.
With that all said, I love your story so far! I'm in chapter 2 and I, as a new Sakura/Naruto fan, can't wait to read the rest!
Keep writing and stay strong, healthy, and happy,
-Diecupcakes
3/21/2020 c7 2Fluffy-Akumaru
this story is a mystery and every chapter is hilarious! Freaking love this
2Fluffy-Akumaruthis story is a mystery and every chapter is hilarious! Freaking love this
2/24/2020 c13 A Fan
Best line, "Now let's go have Ichiraku ramen and let everybody know!". Ramen/10 would laugh again.
Best line, "Now let's go have Ichiraku ramen and let everybody know!". Ramen/10 would laugh again.
12/27/2019 c13 4Masked Kitsune59
There where times I want to immediately leave a review, asking why their wasn't any more expansion to the day to day. I think it would've taken it from a normal, well written fan fiction. and, this is solely based on reading just one of your stories, the way you detail, the way you play it out. I believe this could've been and epic length story wise with many different twists and turns along the way. I still look forward to the marriage/kid(s) chapters. But, I will remain firm that with your premise and ability you could've taken the story into greater detail and expanses. However, this is by no means a shot at your story, I absolutely love it and you have 1000% earned the follow and favorite I'll be giving you after this comment! Wonderful story, usually I'd give you a 9/10 for that little mark in my personal rankings. But, because of how well put together it is I can't find myself giving it any less than a 9.5/10
4Masked Kitsune59There where times I want to immediately leave a review, asking why their wasn't any more expansion to the day to day. I think it would've taken it from a normal, well written fan fiction. and, this is solely based on reading just one of your stories, the way you detail, the way you play it out. I believe this could've been and epic length story wise with many different twists and turns along the way. I still look forward to the marriage/kid(s) chapters. But, I will remain firm that with your premise and ability you could've taken the story into greater detail and expanses. However, this is by no means a shot at your story, I absolutely love it and you have 1000% earned the follow and favorite I'll be giving you after this comment! Wonderful story, usually I'd give you a 9/10 for that little mark in my personal rankings. But, because of how well put together it is I can't find myself giving it any less than a 9.5/10
11/10/2019 c13 1Thatoneguy1109
Just binged read the entire thing. Have to be up in 3 hours for an 11 hour shift. Hate myself, loved the story, goodnight.
1Thatoneguy1109Just binged read the entire thing. Have to be up in 3 hours for an 11 hour shift. Hate myself, loved the story, goodnight.
10/23/2019 c10 JerHat
I've read a fair few M rated Naruto stories. I do believe this is the first time I have read a clone being dispelled in that manner. Absolutely amazing.
I've read a fair few M rated Naruto stories. I do believe this is the first time I have read a clone being dispelled in that manner. Absolutely amazing.
4/24/2019 c13 Guest
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12/23/2018 c13 1Dragonjek
From now on, I propose that all demands for proposals be accompanied by threats of murder.
1DragonjekFrom now on, I propose that all demands for proposals be accompanied by threats of murder.
11/23/2018 c13 pppppppbcffb
some of the best shit I've read in awhile. actually, one of the first fics I've been able to stomach till the end, like in years! love it, love it and one hell of a job!
some of the best shit I've read in awhile. actually, one of the first fics I've been able to stomach till the end, like in years! love it, love it and one hell of a job!
11/19/2018 c13 Hazard1122
Just finished reading this story and loved it. It is rare that anyone can make me like Sakura because I borderline hated her in the show for how she treated Naruto but you did a damn good job!
Just finished reading this story and loved it. It is rare that anyone can make me like Sakura because I borderline hated her in the show for how she treated Naruto but you did a damn good job!