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3/2/2021 c1 Diancecht
Don't the doors have locks?
10/19/2020 c1 mooyorktimes
DEGUSTANG!(Supposed to be disgusting but with more emphasize)
3/14/2020 c1 Guest
Oh shit, floor 19 walked in on them having sex! That’s honestly just wrong. Eeeeewwwwwwww! It’s like that one hero’s of Olympus Tory I read we’re they played seven minutes of heaven and everyone got their soulmate and they pretty much had sex with each other, except for hazel and frank, who had enough class to wait until they got married. Point is, that’s just wrong man. Think about those young fans who read this.
1/27/2020 c1 Magnus
Can you make one were alex is a girl
1/6/2018 c1 no
no no no no no no
no no no no no no no no no no n o
11/5/2017 c1 PippenWeens
Hi this was really nice to read, but there are some things I think you can improve on. Instead of writing: Magnus-How are you? And Alex- I don't think so.
Try writing: “How are you?” Magus asked and “I don't think so,” Alex said.
It will make your text flow better.
Something that will also make your text flow better is if you don't use this (text) as much. There is nothing wrong in using it but try to keep the use to a minimum.

Hope this was helpful!

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