for Waiting8/24/2021 c1 
10AdrienStalkry
It's been a minute since I read this story and I'll try to leave a more indepth review on my next read through but I just wanted to stop by and say thank you so much for sharing! :o)
10AdrienStalkryIt's been a minute since I read this story and I'll try to leave a more indepth review on my next read through but I just wanted to stop by and say thank you so much for sharing! :o)
4/27/2021 c1 Alex Nymph
Please give a sequel
Please give a sequel
3/6/2019 c1 JoySalvatore1
Goodness I LOVE the story!
Happy Jake and smart sassy Bella for the win!
Please make a sequel!
Goodness I LOVE the story!
Happy Jake and smart sassy Bella for the win!
Please make a sequel!
1/22/2019 c1 1TrueRedDragonGodEmperor
Not a bad story but definitely not what I expected. From the summary I was expecting a story that simply diverted slightly from canon. A story with the same setting as canon but merely diverting at Bella's choice to be patient and wait for Jake to 'get better' from his sickness. The story however seems very different in plot, setting, and character characterization. Bella doesn't act like herself, doesn't seem to be effected by Edward being gone, hasn't scared her friends away, isn't a zombie, seems fine with music, etc...All these differences just make the story seem very AU. Not bad but not what I expected.
1TrueRedDragonGodEmperorNot a bad story but definitely not what I expected. From the summary I was expecting a story that simply diverted slightly from canon. A story with the same setting as canon but merely diverting at Bella's choice to be patient and wait for Jake to 'get better' from his sickness. The story however seems very different in plot, setting, and character characterization. Bella doesn't act like herself, doesn't seem to be effected by Edward being gone, hasn't scared her friends away, isn't a zombie, seems fine with music, etc...All these differences just make the story seem very AU. Not bad but not what I expected.
11/25/2018 c1 Debbie Hicks
2. Chapter 2.
ALIEN RATTLESNAKES MAULED ME And huin bitten wwith as all of most of WASINGTION THEN FORGED WITH four or more created a army of newborns drained then bitten Bre Tanner with him with as all of them trashing attacking aliens/Vulcans the Volturi stepped a pity who created you al;l pain then screamijg lost control Bitten Claire Young Isabella guilty off your crimes the y turned us Felix rids of the Newborns myu screams was louder then Assaullted by abusing then as all of Murdered Wt ho created you both Isabella GFelix with Isabella guilty then Executed by the em Broken was Mauled by alien animals good do more onto them again then CRACKED! Venom was d streaking too hardest were more than as all, tore clothes then was sickest with them with child Relapsed Attacked was Soulless take their lives the four came you die then Brokjen from here with them with the four Blew freely was as all of scarred without a soul then Sliced then Bought here good they been punishhed Isabella's dead with child eight Shiftpires were without memories erased Tore from motionless corpses hatch kids are next dead are Immortal children Extinct they were drained of as all of blood swallowed good then lost need to breed anymore tried to stop it they are Sentenced to death fully completely time ofgficially once they rise they gathered the witnesses blew apart are Anmesiacs Bring them here we Volturi find you Guilty Put to death with as all of Worldwide as all of them Sentenced to death Guards Terminate them at once then with six then screams of them Cursed them with Volterra then Murdered them heads ripped lose then Alice had a vision myself was a self-defensive mental-physical shield most powerful Alice she was assaulted by them is scarred beyond repair dead by them but woke Anmesiac then Chained guilty of the Army the mother must die my screams KILLED With them Tore from here Punished then Bought them forbidden to reside struggling with the fiery thirst and bloodlust then nulled motionless Bought here then With as all of remains of worldwide supernatural beings's corpses then had them Killed were was Sickest with a disease then Snapped from here with them Delivered had only eight grown Shiftpire kids were Venomous followed had eight Alice she is not alive so the kids then too late myself was in fact with them Immortal beings shattered from here but bought here good no longer alive with both blood were as all of few but last remains then too late Ashes from here wee broken freely blood That I Want were as all of newest guards stolen from here then cremation then now witnesses they were all of them Alice they were framed but they never have kids anymore then were most remains nuked with more Snapped freely bring them guioty of treason/death but brought as all of them good then lost from here As all of guards blown then then Cursed them then no longer alive then suddenly myself was with golden/black eyes Alice they never age of the hosts grantd us/them to live forever who did to you watch it Private never to be touched myself was cold but haughty oh my god acts like me then Alice got the vision they are all nuked coming to get us/worldwide we are aboard then too late no longer alive with humans as all both merged with shuttles were with them EXPLOSION! With homes/Cities/travel spots /colleges/high schools/preschools and law/milltary nuked freely DESTROYED! Good never to return with most as all of it then with City of Heaven destroyed then merged with Asgard with as all of them Were most more as all Nuked by bombing bring as all of them with as all of them then too late as all of books of life now Book of True Bittle Immortality cursed with us/as all of them nuked frozen solid then destroyed from here bopught here then lost rights/freedom the both saved raptured nuked with as all of them shattered from here now a new Earth was created then too late without it went nova bodes then then suddenly pierced good were as all of is left then then lost here then Split from here were most more Wiped out now unable to return was a truest domed-city-starship blew apart now never from here suddenly too late reached Vulcan crunching sinking too hardest then most more as all of them Interlinked then used five then All of them Blacking outside bought here good they are found guilty they are drained then wiped from here lost from here with gods/goddesses then nuked then created a race to call their own now stranded on the planet Vulcan were as all of most more had as all of kids stopped from here nuked then with us/they followed no longer alive then stopped from here by 2018 we were still here existing bodies were as all of buried on Earth they nuked as all sub-races as all of them now too late the curse onto them was real but true onto Them.
2. Chapter 2.
ALIEN RATTLESNAKES MAULED ME And huin bitten wwith as all of most of WASINGTION THEN FORGED WITH four or more created a army of newborns drained then bitten Bre Tanner with him with as all of them trashing attacking aliens/Vulcans the Volturi stepped a pity who created you al;l pain then screamijg lost control Bitten Claire Young Isabella guilty off your crimes the y turned us Felix rids of the Newborns myu screams was louder then Assaullted by abusing then as all of Murdered Wt ho created you both Isabella GFelix with Isabella guilty then Executed by the em Broken was Mauled by alien animals good do more onto them again then CRACKED! Venom was d streaking too hardest were more than as all, tore clothes then was sickest with them with child Relapsed Attacked was Soulless take their lives the four came you die then Brokjen from here with them with the four Blew freely was as all of scarred without a soul then Sliced then Bought here good they been punishhed Isabella's dead with child eight Shiftpires were without memories erased Tore from motionless corpses hatch kids are next dead are Immortal children Extinct they were drained of as all of blood swallowed good then lost need to breed anymore tried to stop it they are Sentenced to death fully completely time ofgficially once they rise they gathered the witnesses blew apart are Anmesiacs Bring them here we Volturi find you Guilty Put to death with as all of Worldwide as all of them Sentenced to death Guards Terminate them at once then with six then screams of them Cursed them with Volterra then Murdered them heads ripped lose then Alice had a vision myself was a self-defensive mental-physical shield most powerful Alice she was assaulted by them is scarred beyond repair dead by them but woke Anmesiac then Chained guilty of the Army the mother must die my screams KILLED With them Tore from here Punished then Bought them forbidden to reside struggling with the fiery thirst and bloodlust then nulled motionless Bought here then With as all of remains of worldwide supernatural beings's corpses then had them Killed were was Sickest with a disease then Snapped from here with them Delivered had only eight grown Shiftpire kids were Venomous followed had eight Alice she is not alive so the kids then too late myself was in fact with them Immortal beings shattered from here but bought here good no longer alive with both blood were as all of few but last remains then too late Ashes from here wee broken freely blood That I Want were as all of newest guards stolen from here then cremation then now witnesses they were all of them Alice they were framed but they never have kids anymore then were most remains nuked with more Snapped freely bring them guioty of treason/death but brought as all of them good then lost from here As all of guards blown then then Cursed them then no longer alive then suddenly myself was with golden/black eyes Alice they never age of the hosts grantd us/them to live forever who did to you watch it Private never to be touched myself was cold but haughty oh my god acts like me then Alice got the vision they are all nuked coming to get us/worldwide we are aboard then too late no longer alive with humans as all both merged with shuttles were with them EXPLOSION! With homes/Cities/travel spots /colleges/high schools/preschools and law/milltary nuked freely DESTROYED! Good never to return with most as all of it then with City of Heaven destroyed then merged with Asgard with as all of them Were most more as all Nuked by bombing bring as all of them with as all of them then too late as all of books of life now Book of True Bittle Immortality cursed with us/as all of them nuked frozen solid then destroyed from here bopught here then lost rights/freedom the both saved raptured nuked with as all of them shattered from here now a new Earth was created then too late without it went nova bodes then then suddenly pierced good were as all of is left then then lost here then Split from here were most more Wiped out now unable to return was a truest domed-city-starship blew apart now never from here suddenly too late reached Vulcan crunching sinking too hardest then most more as all of them Interlinked then used five then All of them Blacking outside bought here good they are found guilty they are drained then wiped from here lost from here with gods/goddesses then nuked then created a race to call their own now stranded on the planet Vulcan were as all of most more had as all of kids stopped from here nuked then with us/they followed no longer alive then stopped from here by 2018 we were still here existing bodies were as all of buried on Earth they nuked as all sub-races as all of them now too late the curse onto them was real but true onto Them.
7/20/2018 c1 1AHealingRenaissance
Wow... I hate Jacob, and you just made me love him. Jaw, meet Floor ;-)
1AHealingRenaissanceWow... I hate Jacob, and you just made me love him. Jaw, meet Floor ;-)
5/29/2018 c1 Fullofpassion09
This was a fantastic spin off of what could have been after they left her!
This was a fantastic spin off of what could have been after they left her!