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7/4/2017 c1 Guest
Finally a promising story with the nids keep going
7/4/2017 c1 Akshka

I like it
7/4/2017 c1 2Vostok2142
This can turn into a horror show in .2 seconds if you write it from the Hunter's point of view. A clash between Goliaths and a Hive Tyrant would be fantastic.
7/4/2017 c1 1lordazemar0
7/4/2017 c1 4Solarfish
This... This could work. Really well at that. It is a beautiful piece, fluid and eloquent. I enjoyed it from beginning to end. The pace wasn't too fast nor too slow, and the flow of information wasn't jarring or vague. All in all, a really good read.

I think there were two typos, I could PM the paragraphs to you and point them out if you want.

The idea is... humorous, if only because of its starkly out of place viciousness. The raw 'wtf is that' that will come from a misplaced hive tyrant is an idea that I hope to relish in full.

The way you managed to get the tyrant into the RWBY'verse was magnificent. The nature of the character meaning not much thought was directed at the 'how' and 'why' but more on the 'what now'... truly superb.

It will be interesting to see it interact with humanity and the carnage of said 'interaction'.

Keep mashing keyboard,
7/4/2017 c1 Da purple ork
Finnaly a story from the tyranids point of view

Please update soon
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