for Harry and Amber connected12/18/2017 c11 comodo50
Liked the story, altough some first few chapters have some extra spaces and typos and whatnot.
That aside, like I said, liked the story (:
Liked the story, altough some first few chapters have some extra spaces and typos and whatnot.
That aside, like I said, liked the story (:
11/10/2017 c11 willrocket08
that was amazingly well written, I just wish that the story was slightly longer as it seemed like I opened chapter one and was on chapter eleven ten minutes faster. other than that this is an idea I havent seen a lot of so well done on being unique
that was amazingly well written, I just wish that the story was slightly longer as it seemed like I opened chapter one and was on chapter eleven ten minutes faster. other than that this is an idea I havent seen a lot of so well done on being unique
8/10/2017 c11 Guest
Very good begining of story.
Very, very crappy ending...
Very good begining of story.
Very, very crappy ending...
8/10/2017 c11 Neon1311
The story is interesting, some things could have been elaborated a little more and some situations, like the one with Neo and Adam are resolved to easy.
Chapter 10 lacks something to indicate the passing of time. It is written as if every event happens immediately after the previous one.
The story is interesting, some things could have been elaborated a little more and some situations, like the one with Neo and Adam are resolved to easy.
Chapter 10 lacks something to indicate the passing of time. It is written as if every event happens immediately after the previous one.
8/10/2017 c11 
1AnFan-n-More
Thanks for the quick updates. Loved reading this story. I agree on the HP/RWBY dearth of good stories. Especially finished ones!
1AnFan-n-MoreThanks for the quick updates. Loved reading this story. I agree on the HP/RWBY dearth of good stories. Especially finished ones!
8/10/2017 c11 3WhiteElfElder
I am surprised that Harry and Neville did not get used as stud material for the female/female pairs. Can't say I have any problem with what happened to Cinder and Torchwick...live by the sword!
3WhiteElfElderI am surprised that Harry and Neville did not get used as stud material for the female/female pairs. Can't say I have any problem with what happened to Cinder and Torchwick...live by the sword!
8/10/2017 c10 WhiteElfElder
Looks like things are coming to either a head, or an end, rather quickly.
Looks like things are coming to either a head, or an end, rather quickly.
8/9/2017 c9 39robert32514
Beside's a few missing and misspelled words, it looks to be a good story. Keep it up.
39robert32514Beside's a few missing and misspelled words, it looks to be a good story. Keep it up.