for To The Next10/27/2024 c63 MargaritaS
Great story so far, I'm a little confused about Alex's memories, does she remember nothing after Cedric dying in the tournament? I am looking forward to reading more :)
Great story so far, I'm a little confused about Alex's memories, does she remember nothing after Cedric dying in the tournament? I am looking forward to reading more :)
8/13/2024 c55 uiuonn
I feel like this main character talks a big game but never really does much to take revenge, sure it happens but very rarely and i'm really starting to dislike her for being a cowardly victim.
I feel like this main character talks a big game but never really does much to take revenge, sure it happens but very rarely and i'm really starting to dislike her for being a cowardly victim.
8/12/2024 c45 uiuonn
Eh, kind of a boring way to deal with the ending of the tri-wizard tournament, it's an otherwise really good story though.
Eh, kind of a boring way to deal with the ending of the tri-wizard tournament, it's an otherwise really good story though.
7/20/2024 c1 DecayedAsh
i knew the user was familiar (saw you in a naruto fanfiction, dear author). i've forgotten how this story goes already, so i guess i'll be back to reading
i knew the user was familiar (saw you in a naruto fanfiction, dear author). i've forgotten how this story goes already, so i guess i'll be back to reading
6/22/2024 c63 
5CupcakeLoopy
I was just rereading this, and gosh, I'd forgotten how good i is. I really hope you haven't given up it! anyways, illpray for an update
5CupcakeLoopyI was just rereading this, and gosh, I'd forgotten how good i is. I really hope you haven't given up it! anyways, illpray for an update
6/19/2024 c63 6Sorcerer's Scone
Youve weaved a great story here! Especially engaging is Alex's personality and backstory. I like that she is a clear "good" Slytherin, but still has a dark side in a time of war. I found myself annoyed with Alex's inaction and some of her decisions, it can't be easy reliving childhood (and puberty, agh). At the same time, her prescence has ripple effects and I have really enjoyed seeing it play out! Thanks for writing and sharing.
6Sorcerer's SconeYouve weaved a great story here! Especially engaging is Alex's personality and backstory. I like that she is a clear "good" Slytherin, but still has a dark side in a time of war. I found myself annoyed with Alex's inaction and some of her decisions, it can't be easy reliving childhood (and puberty, agh). At the same time, her prescence has ripple effects and I have really enjoyed seeing it play out! Thanks for writing and sharing.
6/19/2024 c62 Sorcerer's Scone
Fyi, there are a few times you mention "fourth-year prefects" where I think you meant 5th.
In all of this story, thats the only inconsistency i found, which is honestly amazing!
Fyi, there are a few times you mention "fourth-year prefects" where I think you meant 5th.
In all of this story, thats the only inconsistency i found, which is honestly amazing!
5/14/2024 c41 5Whimsical Acumen
1. I love your version of the Valentine’s date between Harry and Cho. So much better tbh than what happened in the original.
2. Thank you for correcting as well the “stare at murky water for an hour”. I can’t recall if that was a weird movie interpretation, or something omitted from the books, but either way i applaud your inclusion of this!
3. I love that Viktor and Hermione are actually dating. They’re cute together, and they were in the books, too
4. The inclusion of the merpeople having their own “village” and culture I love and I cannot believe it never occurred to me to wonder about their home. Well done!
5Whimsical Acumen1. I love your version of the Valentine’s date between Harry and Cho. So much better tbh than what happened in the original.
2. Thank you for correcting as well the “stare at murky water for an hour”. I can’t recall if that was a weird movie interpretation, or something omitted from the books, but either way i applaud your inclusion of this!
3. I love that Viktor and Hermione are actually dating. They’re cute together, and they were in the books, too
4. The inclusion of the merpeople having their own “village” and culture I love and I cannot believe it never occurred to me to wonder about their home. Well done!
4/18/2024 c62 Ragnaky
A very good story, i really like the character you created in Alexandra. Sad to see it ending in such an abrupt way, but it is understandable. Hopefully your outside life is going well. Regardless. Thank you for the story and the good fun i had reading it.
A very good story, i really like the character you created in Alexandra. Sad to see it ending in such an abrupt way, but it is understandable. Hopefully your outside life is going well. Regardless. Thank you for the story and the good fun i had reading it.
4/18/2024 c38 Whimsical Acumen
I admit I don’t agree with Alex tying with Harry. She should have been 3rd or 4th for technically cheatingBUT what is more important, and what I continue to appreciate, is the kindness and humanizing of characters. Especially Fleur and Cedric (i do feel for the latter this chapter that he’s suffering Alex’s obliviousness)
I admit I don’t agree with Alex tying with Harry. She should have been 3rd or 4th for technically cheatingBUT what is more important, and what I continue to appreciate, is the kindness and humanizing of characters. Especially Fleur and Cedric (i do feel for the latter this chapter that he’s suffering Alex’s obliviousness)