for I will Try To Fix You7/14 c1 Guest
OMG this story was corny as hell. I thought oh a fluffy story but after reading it I have to say it's a corny story, but you just can't look a way and I'm LMAO. The part with the them ovulating on the same day and getting pregnant on the same day was really out there. Really and the drama with him parents lol like ok it was just a misunderstanding we love you and want the best.
OMG this story was corny as hell. I thought oh a fluffy story but after reading it I have to say it's a corny story, but you just can't look a way and I'm LMAO. The part with the them ovulating on the same day and getting pregnant on the same day was really out there. Really and the drama with him parents lol like ok it was just a misunderstanding we love you and want the best.
5/6/2022 c21 Anonymous
Got a lil stupid at the end but fine
Got a lil stupid at the end but fine
1/18/2022 c5 Unicorntoy
This vulnerable Draco was just so cute, and I’m happy you characterized him with this mentality. He came much more real like a human to me in this fiction. This fiction sounds logic to me in a sense that if it was a story in Harry Potter, things would have turn this way. Of course after the war, there would be someone got traumatized by that, and it would be to no other than Draco Malfoy. I love your narratives so much.
This vulnerable Draco was just so cute, and I’m happy you characterized him with this mentality. He came much more real like a human to me in this fiction. This fiction sounds logic to me in a sense that if it was a story in Harry Potter, things would have turn this way. Of course after the war, there would be someone got traumatized by that, and it would be to no other than Draco Malfoy. I love your narratives so much.
11/11/2020 c21 
4David Fishwick
Excellent idea and thanks for writing and I liked how you wrote the relationship between Draco and Hermione in this story.
4David FishwickExcellent idea and thanks for writing and I liked how you wrote the relationship between Draco and Hermione in this story.
5/3/2020 c21 BlueOrchid96
I loved the story. Thank you so much for all your hard work and sharing it with us.
I loved the story. Thank you so much for all your hard work and sharing it with us.
5/3/2020 c20 BlueOrchid96
So sweet and very interesting they all had boys. I think that’s great though. All growing up together as family.
So sweet and very interesting they all had boys. I think that’s great though. All growing up together as family.
5/3/2020 c18 BlueOrchid96
Wow! Well, that went better than planned. Malfoy still needs a kick in the butt for not allowing the letters to come from Draco. He seems happy to have his parents back so that’s good.
Wow! Well, that went better than planned. Malfoy still needs a kick in the butt for not allowing the letters to come from Draco. He seems happy to have his parents back so that’s good.
5/3/2020 c17 BlueOrchid96
Malfoy is an a$$hole. Even if he thought he was helping Draco, he’s still a douche and evil for how he went about it. He put the diary in 11 year old Ginny’s bag. He screwed Draco and deserves to live without his wife for a bit to feel some of Draco’s pain. Then he needs to beg for some major forgiveness from numerous people if he wants some of his life back. (Can you tell I don’t like him? LoL)
Malfoy is an a$$hole. Even if he thought he was helping Draco, he’s still a douche and evil for how he went about it. He put the diary in 11 year old Ginny’s bag. He screwed Draco and deserves to live without his wife for a bit to feel some of Draco’s pain. Then he needs to beg for some major forgiveness from numerous people if he wants some of his life back. (Can you tell I don’t like him? LoL)
5/3/2020 c16 BlueOrchid96
Whew! I was concerned with how Draco would handle finding out they had been in contact with his mother. So glad the baby is ok and that Narcissa went to see them.
Whew! I was concerned with how Draco would handle finding out they had been in contact with his mother. So glad the baby is ok and that Narcissa went to see them.
5/2/2020 c15 BlueOrchid96
Oh crap! I know what she was doing and why but dang that was a risk to the baby. I can’t imagine if something happens to she/he.
Oh crap! I know what she was doing and why but dang that was a risk to the baby. I can’t imagine if something happens to she/he.