for Checklists9/27/2018 c1 
48reppad98
Interesting read. In the beginning it wasn't clear who Paul's girlfriend was, but I think that was your purpose and it kept me reading. A tip would be to leave the descriptions of the clothes out, it felt really like a checklist (excuse the pun) of everyone's outfits. Still, it was a nice read, a nice and fun idea.
Thank you for writing and keep writing!
48reppad98Interesting read. In the beginning it wasn't clear who Paul's girlfriend was, but I think that was your purpose and it kept me reading. A tip would be to leave the descriptions of the clothes out, it felt really like a checklist (excuse the pun) of everyone's outfits. Still, it was a nice read, a nice and fun idea.
Thank you for writing and keep writing!
8/14/2017 c1 27HolyVengeance
Flavored malt beverages are probably the best tasting alcoholic drinks ever made by humans. Paul strikes me as a vodka kind of guy.
27HolyVengeanceFlavored malt beverages are probably the best tasting alcoholic drinks ever made by humans. Paul strikes me as a vodka kind of guy.
7/11/2017 c1 Dead Account 000000
Damn, the person you wrote this bullshit for must be super disappointed because this sucks major ass.
Damn, the person you wrote this bullshit for must be super disappointed because this sucks major ass.