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9/27/2018 c1 48reppad98
Interesting read. In the beginning it wasn't clear who Paul's girlfriend was, but I think that was your purpose and it kept me reading. A tip would be to leave the descriptions of the clothes out, it felt really like a checklist (excuse the pun) of everyone's outfits. Still, it was a nice read, a nice and fun idea.
Thank you for writing and keep writing!
8/14/2017 c1 27HolyVengeance
Flavored malt beverages are probably the best tasting alcoholic drinks ever made by humans. Paul strikes me as a vodka kind of guy.
7/12/2017 c1 4Dragon Soul94
Thank you so much hon! I loved the story/gift hehe ;). It was great
7/11/2017 c1 Dead Account 000000
Damn, the person you wrote this bullshit for must be super disappointed because this sucks major ass.

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