for The Man who would be King7/11/2017 c1 
6Lightningblade49
Curious if this fruit might influence is personality a little, seems lieka common trope ice users are more calm.
6Lightningblade49Curious if this fruit might influence is personality a little, seems lieka common trope ice users are more calm.
7/10/2017 c1 2fireandicephoenix
i like the idea for your story. it's interesting and different and funny, especially the end bit when Luffy realises he can't beat Ace since fire melts ice.
maybe for a suggest against Enel would be for Luffy to be wearing a rubber band (or several and rubber sole shoes?) or something? that way the lighting/electricity from Enel's fruit won't really effect Luffy that much. or maybe Usopp can make a rubber weapon of some kind hat Luffy uses? or maybe a special metal box that they could catch/trap him? or something? i don't know, but i like your story.
can't wait to see your see next haper
2fireandicephoenixi like the idea for your story. it's interesting and different and funny, especially the end bit when Luffy realises he can't beat Ace since fire melts ice.
maybe for a suggest against Enel would be for Luffy to be wearing a rubber band (or several and rubber sole shoes?) or something? that way the lighting/electricity from Enel's fruit won't really effect Luffy that much. or maybe Usopp can make a rubber weapon of some kind hat Luffy uses? or maybe a special metal box that they could catch/trap him? or something? i don't know, but i like your story.
can't wait to see your see next haper
7/9/2017 c1 Nangid
It sounds dumb just a random idea that just popped up but hey its one piece...How bout for nami a paramecia fruit called the map map fruit or the Chizu Chizu fruit.
since she is a navigator if she ate this she wouldn't have to rely on log poses as much. like she can sense islands energy or something like that but only by a few miles or even hidden ones no one knew existed or however you wanna make if you use not op at all just would help navigate not good in a fight
It sounds dumb just a random idea that just popped up but hey its one piece...How bout for nami a paramecia fruit called the map map fruit or the Chizu Chizu fruit.
since she is a navigator if she ate this she wouldn't have to rely on log poses as much. like she can sense islands energy or something like that but only by a few miles or even hidden ones no one knew existed or however you wanna make if you use not op at all just would help navigate not good in a fight
7/9/2017 c1 Guest
Okay, I have a few notes
But this story seems pretty good
I plan to look for new chapters
Okay, I have a few notes
But this story seems pretty good
I plan to look for new chapters
7/9/2017 c1 1HeWho'sComplicated
I am both intrigued and disappointed that Luffy's new devil fruit is Kuzans old fruit. Out of all the marines, he was one of my favorites alongside Garp, Fujitora, and Rosinante. Still the story has me intrigued at both the new potential for storyline changes with Ice-Man Luffy and his relationship with Nico Robin due to how she seems to feel about Kuzan in this story. Please update soon so I can learn more of your brilliant storytelling abilities.
1HeWho'sComplicatedI am both intrigued and disappointed that Luffy's new devil fruit is Kuzans old fruit. Out of all the marines, he was one of my favorites alongside Garp, Fujitora, and Rosinante. Still the story has me intrigued at both the new potential for storyline changes with Ice-Man Luffy and his relationship with Nico Robin due to how she seems to feel about Kuzan in this story. Please update soon so I can learn more of your brilliant storytelling abilities.
7/9/2017 c1 Awareness Bringer
Looks alright enough, but I hope Luffy had some other tricks to take down Arlong and others since he didn't have a Devil Fruit in the first place.
Looks alright enough, but I hope Luffy had some other tricks to take down Arlong and others since he didn't have a Devil Fruit in the first place.
7/9/2017 c1 Seikunaras
great starting chapter, you got my attention
please keep up the good work
Do you plan to do a paring?
Naras
great starting chapter, you got my attention
please keep up the good work
Do you plan to do a paring?
Naras