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1Salt the Conqueror
Man, episode 8 was total fucking peak. It might be the best episode they've ever made. I mean, my gosh man. Also the animation is immaculate. They are cooking up some stuff that I have no idea if it's in the comics or not but it's definitely interesting. Worst part is going to be waiting for the next season, but this shit was gas, you definitely need to watch it ASAP.
Good chapter btw (I didn't read it)
1Salt the ConquerorMan, episode 8 was total fucking peak. It might be the best episode they've ever made. I mean, my gosh man. Also the animation is immaculate. They are cooking up some stuff that I have no idea if it's in the comics or not but it's definitely interesting. Worst part is going to be waiting for the next season, but this shit was gas, you definitely need to watch it ASAP.
Good chapter btw (I didn't read it)
3/9 c64 Tiger 6329
took you long enough bast$#d.. though the two month wait was worth it i guess. nice little refreshment before my exams
took you long enough bast$#d.. though the two month wait was worth it i guess. nice little refreshment before my exams
3/5 c12 mattias.akerlund.71
seriously, the amount of stories where danzo has to answer for his treachery are way too few
seriously, the amount of stories where danzo has to answer for his treachery are way too few
3/5 c25 maalik
I never cringed harder than i did today.
I was reminded of a saying:
"A character can only be as smart as its author"
in this chapter, you made naruto say a very basic ass remark and made everyone act like he's a professor.
I rate trash/10 overall.
I never cringed harder than i did today.
I was reminded of a saying:
"A character can only be as smart as its author"
in this chapter, you made naruto say a very basic ass remark and made everyone act like he's a professor.
I rate trash/10 overall.
3/5 c23 maalik
Your writing of naruto reuniting with his friends is a complete disaster.
naruto is barely distinguishable from Kirito at this point
Just a new Gary Sue. This is your idea of character development. Pathetic
Your writing of naruto reuniting with his friends is a complete disaster.
naruto is barely distinguishable from Kirito at this point
Just a new Gary Sue. This is your idea of character development. Pathetic
3/5 c22 maalik
not really liking the direction of naruto's character.
the author seems to think performing "quick bows" and behaving like a diplomat to close friends is character development
Cringe
not really liking the direction of naruto's character.
the author seems to think performing "quick bows" and behaving like a diplomat to close friends is character development
Cringe
3/5 c8 mattias.akerlund.71
lol well you fooled me, having tenzo as neko, usually thats hayate gekkos gfs mask... that also explain the monotone voice, since tenzo used to be ne...
lol well you fooled me, having tenzo as neko, usually thats hayate gekkos gfs mask... that also explain the monotone voice, since tenzo used to be ne...
3/5 c7 mattias.akerlund.71
meh im no ninja, and even i can say thats root anbu, using proper anbu masks...
meh im no ninja, and even i can say thats root anbu, using proper anbu masks...
3/4 c64 Kastra Pyrolux
It's cool to see Naruto very near Jiraiya's level. That is an insane new technique, but it'll at least level the playing field in the next battle.
Love Team Seven and Team Hebi sharing a house. Love that Sai is includedThis whole thing was... bittersweet? Is that the word? Aside from Naruto, everyone seems to be handling this okay. A bond between Jiraiya and Sakura is something I never expected, but was a surprisingly wholesome result of the matters at hand. Now they just need to cooperate on breaking into the Fort Knox that is accessing Naruto's emotions
It's cool to see Naruto very near Jiraiya's level. That is an insane new technique, but it'll at least level the playing field in the next battle.
Love Team Seven and Team Hebi sharing a house. Love that Sai is includedThis whole thing was... bittersweet? Is that the word? Aside from Naruto, everyone seems to be handling this okay. A bond between Jiraiya and Sakura is something I never expected, but was a surprisingly wholesome result of the matters at hand. Now they just need to cooperate on breaking into the Fort Knox that is accessing Naruto's emotions
3/4 c64 Kastra Pyrolux
Can't say I'm shocked at the results of that initial fight. Bro better be hoping he has his hax active.
The way Sakura's grief is handled here is perfect. It's realistic and true to her character, oh, and it hurts to read, so it's gotta be good. Suigetsu and Karin being the ones to help confort her was a welcome surprise, I expected Karin to an extent, but not Suigetsu. This was a great scene.
So was Sasuke's! Love how he's being portrayed, his situation really feels like things are going in the right direction for him, a positive what if scenario. It's greatSasori and Ibiki's little battle is great fun. Ibiki has dealt a truly devastating blow lol
Can't say I'm shocked at the results of that initial fight. Bro better be hoping he has his hax active.
The way Sakura's grief is handled here is perfect. It's realistic and true to her character, oh, and it hurts to read, so it's gotta be good. Suigetsu and Karin being the ones to help confort her was a welcome surprise, I expected Karin to an extent, but not Suigetsu. This was a great scene.
So was Sasuke's! Love how he's being portrayed, his situation really feels like things are going in the right direction for him, a positive what if scenario. It's greatSasori and Ibiki's little battle is great fun. Ibiki has dealt a truly devastating blow lol
3/4 c16 maalik
Oh no not another authorship arc.
Oh no not another authorship arc.