for Shamrock9/4/2021 c4 DraconicDuelist
But disappointed there's only 4 chapters, but it was fun while it lasted.
But disappointed there's only 4 chapters, but it was fun while it lasted.
9/4/2021 c1 DraconicDuelist
Not much changed for chapter 1, but looks promising with what was.
Thanks for providing translations at the end. One of the things that really irritated me about Rorschach's was that none of his seemed to have them...
Not much changed for chapter 1, but looks promising with what was.
Thanks for providing translations at the end. One of the things that really irritated me about Rorschach's was that none of his seemed to have them...
12/21/2020 c4 stacyleedam25
Please update this story is so good and can't wait to see what happens next
Please update this story is so good and can't wait to see what happens next
7/26/2020 c4 Guest
Great job! I like harry and aife’s relationship. You have aife who is energetic and happy and harry who is happy and awkward! They complete each other! Also i really love the sprite girls! I think it is adorable that harry is getting bossed around by six inch tall girls.:) so who are the hogwarts transfers? Cause fleur and gabriel are from the french school beaxbatons(may be misspelled). Could it be daphne greengrass and her sister? Cause they are smart and her family is neutral so won’t blatantly follow dumbeldore’s orders to go to schol there.. anyway keep it up!i love the concept and can’t wait for more!
Great job! I like harry and aife’s relationship. You have aife who is energetic and happy and harry who is happy and awkward! They complete each other! Also i really love the sprite girls! I think it is adorable that harry is getting bossed around by six inch tall girls.:) so who are the hogwarts transfers? Cause fleur and gabriel are from the french school beaxbatons(may be misspelled). Could it be daphne greengrass and her sister? Cause they are smart and her family is neutral so won’t blatantly follow dumbeldore’s orders to go to schol there.. anyway keep it up!i love the concept and can’t wait for more!
10/7/2017 c1 hpsbdg
Good story. The grammar and spelling is pretty decent. More spelling mistakes than anything else, but nothing really atrocious. Please continue.
Good story. The grammar and spelling is pretty decent. More spelling mistakes than anything else, but nothing really atrocious. Please continue.
9/26/2017 c4 
7jh831
good story so far.
though would like you to get to the teaching. i am curious to see how they teach differently than Hogwarts.
Also, maybe go into more detail and not go so fast. just as soon as you are done explaining something, you add more information. try adding in some (not a lot) of filler to help imprint the information into our minds/memory, then add more information.
I would also like to see longer chapters. just as soon as i finally felt like i was just getting into the chapter, it was over. so longer chapters would be appreciated.
again, like what you have so far. looking forward to see what you come up with for the next chapter.
7jh831good story so far.
though would like you to get to the teaching. i am curious to see how they teach differently than Hogwarts.
Also, maybe go into more detail and not go so fast. just as soon as you are done explaining something, you add more information. try adding in some (not a lot) of filler to help imprint the information into our minds/memory, then add more information.
I would also like to see longer chapters. just as soon as i finally felt like i was just getting into the chapter, it was over. so longer chapters would be appreciated.
again, like what you have so far. looking forward to see what you come up with for the next chapter.
9/4/2017 c4 Rebmul
well this is interesting and I get the feeling that the nosy girl will be a problem again later
well this is interesting and I get the feeling that the nosy girl will be a problem again later
8/29/2017 c4 90DJ Rodriguez
Now this story holds promise! I read the other chapters, and I have to say this is original and good! I really hope to see more chapters like this in the future. Keep it up!
90DJ RodriguezNow this story holds promise! I read the other chapters, and I have to say this is original and good! I really hope to see more chapters like this in the future. Keep it up!
8/1/2017 c1 Guest
This really doesn't feel like a Harry Potter fic but a nationalist fantasy. They kidnapped Harry who in this fic is a dual citizen with no reason given other than 'Waah, your irish, wah'. Completely ignoring how inane this is, within seconds they are already grooming him for a petty rivalry with Northern Irish wizards which comes out of nowhere and relies on the assumption that Wizarding countries borders mirror ours. Then he randomly attacks a Goblin out of nowhere and they are perely cool with it despite the inherent nature of Goblins to side with the their own before a Human no matter the actions of the Goblin in question.
I'm frankly not going to bother reading beyond the first chapter as on top of the nationalistic drivel it's also poorly written with spacing, grammar and spelling.
This really doesn't feel like a Harry Potter fic but a nationalist fantasy. They kidnapped Harry who in this fic is a dual citizen with no reason given other than 'Waah, your irish, wah'. Completely ignoring how inane this is, within seconds they are already grooming him for a petty rivalry with Northern Irish wizards which comes out of nowhere and relies on the assumption that Wizarding countries borders mirror ours. Then he randomly attacks a Goblin out of nowhere and they are perely cool with it despite the inherent nature of Goblins to side with the their own before a Human no matter the actions of the Goblin in question.
I'm frankly not going to bother reading beyond the first chapter as on top of the nationalistic drivel it's also poorly written with spacing, grammar and spelling.