for bounty hunter ezra5/26/2022 c9 Guest
Great story
Great story
3/3/2020 c10 Cool cats
Looks good please update or at least don't leave us on a cliff hanger
Looks good please update or at least don't leave us on a cliff hanger
1012/10/2019 c4 Guest
Stupid
Stupid
6/13/2019 c2 WarriorsCre3d
Cool, just remember the paragraph rules. You have the new idea new paragraph down fine it's just the coversations
"Duck!"
"Where?"
Instead of "Duck!" "Where?"
Cool, just remember the paragraph rules. You have the new idea new paragraph down fine it's just the coversations
"Duck!"
"Where?"
Instead of "Duck!" "Where?"
6/13/2019 c1 WarriorsCre3d
This has a lot of potential, you may want to consider getting a beta reader to get the kinks out of it
This has a lot of potential, you may want to consider getting a beta reader to get the kinks out of it