for Justice4/10 c27 iaraazevedo1108
olha quen voltou a olha eu sei que eu to praticamente quere do que vc farsa a historia do meu jeito mais eu nao posso evitar e saber lembrar da minha opiniao de alguem trair os chapéus de palhas bom eu acho que a mais provável de fazer isso de todos os viloes ea chettah ele diferente dos outros viloes ela realmnete tem cara de nao se impotar com os chapéus de palha eu consigo ver ela traindo eles e eu quero que os piratas se vem traudos por alguem que eles confiaram
olha quen voltou a olha eu sei que eu to praticamente quere do que vc farsa a historia do meu jeito mais eu nao posso evitar e saber lembrar da minha opiniao de alguem trair os chapéus de palhas bom eu acho que a mais provável de fazer isso de todos os viloes ea chettah ele diferente dos outros viloes ela realmnete tem cara de nao se impotar com os chapéus de palha eu consigo ver ela traindo eles e eu quero que os piratas se vem traudos por alguem que eles confiaram
4/3 c8 iaraazevedo1108
use tradutor olha eu so queri dizer o quanto eu amo o jeito que vc escreveu o cavaleiro nesse capítulo ele sinta falta do tempo dele mais nao o romontiza e tentar ser melhor eu adoraria uma revanche contrao o zorro mais pra frente
use tradutor olha eu so queri dizer o quanto eu amo o jeito que vc escreveu o cavaleiro nesse capítulo ele sinta falta do tempo dele mais nao o romontiza e tentar ser melhor eu adoraria uma revanche contrao o zorro mais pra frente
3/31 c1 Lakyas
To Bloodrick, yes they would be interested but the One Piece world is multiple times larger than planet earth… not that that’s an issue they’d most likely just take the celestial dragons and a few slaves or smth, there’d probably be another war tho.
To Bloodrick, yes they would be interested but the One Piece world is multiple times larger than planet earth… not that that’s an issue they’d most likely just take the celestial dragons and a few slaves or smth, there’d probably be another war tho.
3/28 c28 iaraazevedo1108
a e agora as coisas que eu gostaria que vc fizesse primeiro faça umas das crianças vira contra eles e os deixar segundo faça com que a liga descubra o passado deles com telepatia recomendo um estilo as chistmas carol terceiro que os piratas queiram mudar o mundo deles pelo que aprenderam no da ligae por favor nao faça uma versao de justiça jovem) mas e claro isso tudo se vc quiser se nao ficarei decepcionada mais aceitarei amo seu teabalho tchau
a e agora as coisas que eu gostaria que vc fizesse primeiro faça umas das crianças vira contra eles e os deixar segundo faça com que a liga descubra o passado deles com telepatia recomendo um estilo as chistmas carol terceiro que os piratas queiram mudar o mundo deles pelo que aprenderam no da ligae por favor nao faça uma versao de justiça jovem) mas e claro isso tudo se vc quiser se nao ficarei decepcionada mais aceitarei amo seu teabalho tchau
3/28 c29 iaraazevedo1108
use tradutor againolha eu aqui denovo olha eu quari deixar coisas claras que eu nao quero que sua história siga primeiro se vc fizer a shayera trair a liga nao faça ela se juntar aos piratas por favor sugundo nao faça eles ficarem ate o fim do sem limites faça eles irem de volta no meio terçeiro nao faça com que todos os personagens se atraiam pelos piratas tipo eu nao gosto deles entao traga pessoas normais que sao contras os piratas
use tradutor againolha eu aqui denovo olha eu quari deixar coisas claras que eu nao quero que sua história siga primeiro se vc fizer a shayera trair a liga nao faça ela se juntar aos piratas por favor sugundo nao faça eles ficarem ate o fim do sem limites faça eles irem de volta no meio terçeiro nao faça com que todos os personagens se atraiam pelos piratas tipo eu nao gosto deles entao traga pessoas normais que sao contras os piratas
3/27 c29 iaraazevedo1108
use google tradutor oi eu adoro sua historia olha eu queria que vc fisse os chapéus de palha mudassem com essa experiência com a liga nao muito no modo de agir ou pensar mas um pouco nos dois pointos mas sem mudar a essência deles ea mesma coisa com os herois da liga eu amo eles e o desenho espero que vc continue a historia logo era so isso adeus
use google tradutor oi eu adoro sua historia olha eu queria que vc fisse os chapéus de palha mudassem com essa experiência com a liga nao muito no modo de agir ou pensar mas um pouco nos dois pointos mas sem mudar a essência deles ea mesma coisa com os herois da liga eu amo eles e o desenho espero que vc continue a historia logo era so isso adeus
3/5 c29 Evil Reviewer
Unrelated to the story, but I yield.
Staying in my own little niche I could say I could easily tolerate the issues of FF. Funny how it takes the site acting glitchy with its stories to finally migrate elsewhere from the first place I ever read fanfiction from.
Kind of debating whether to keep my anonymity or not in Ao3. If so, I guess I lost this war of ours. (Coconut drink salute.)
I still claim dibs on the title of arch nemesis however. Suck it posers to the title!
Unrelated to the story, but I yield.
Staying in my own little niche I could say I could easily tolerate the issues of FF. Funny how it takes the site acting glitchy with its stories to finally migrate elsewhere from the first place I ever read fanfiction from.
Kind of debating whether to keep my anonymity or not in Ao3. If so, I guess I lost this war of ours. (Coconut drink salute.)
I still claim dibs on the title of arch nemesis however. Suck it posers to the title!
2/17 c29 Longma
In response to WarlockWarwick
I will say I agree with most of what you said
But would say there is a little difference in opinion.
I doubt Chopper would like Phosphorus very much after learning he killed Thorne's wife and children, but like Chopper wanting Wapol dead for killing his father, I think he wouldn't be super sympathetic but would understand his pain. Understand it, but never agree with it
Although Robin might understand Phosphorus a bit better with her similar related to Spandam
Only other thing that comes to mind about the Bride is she might also avoid Grundy
But Luffy would also mention this isn't the first time he's seen a reanimated body (Thriller Bark) and would probably ask the question he always asks a species he's never seen before (the one about going to the bathroom)
As for G.I. Robot, Franky would definitely like to pick his brain (maybe literally) to understand how the metal man thinks
In response to WarlockWarwick
I will say I agree with most of what you said
But would say there is a little difference in opinion.
I doubt Chopper would like Phosphorus very much after learning he killed Thorne's wife and children, but like Chopper wanting Wapol dead for killing his father, I think he wouldn't be super sympathetic but would understand his pain. Understand it, but never agree with it
Although Robin might understand Phosphorus a bit better with her similar related to Spandam
Only other thing that comes to mind about the Bride is she might also avoid Grundy
But Luffy would also mention this isn't the first time he's seen a reanimated body (Thriller Bark) and would probably ask the question he always asks a species he's never seen before (the one about going to the bathroom)
As for G.I. Robot, Franky would definitely like to pick his brain (maybe literally) to understand how the metal man thinks
2/7 c1 
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2/1 c29 Drastico
to add to WarlockWarwick
I imagine Brook and Franky to demand clarification on that Frankenstein bit.
Nami: that's what concern you?
Brook: Look, I'm not happy with either option but I prefer the comparison to be with the good one and not the creepy stalker! I'm a pervert, but I accept when someone says no.
Franky: Second!
Also I would imagine Luffy and Nami to slap the robot as while they have mixed feeling they do have family serving the navy (Garp and formerly Bell-mere) not to mention Koby.
Though all the Marines are tough on pirates, there's still a variety of lines they don't cross. In terms of standards, there's the moral and relatively merciful (Aokiji, Fujitora and Smoker), the more ruthless but ultimately neutral (Sengoku), and the ones utterly driven to exterminate evil (Akainu).
Basically, they recognize in and of themselves but do recognize the current head (Akainu) is the worst thing to happen in awhile.
to add to WarlockWarwick
I imagine Brook and Franky to demand clarification on that Frankenstein bit.
Nami: that's what concern you?
Brook: Look, I'm not happy with either option but I prefer the comparison to be with the good one and not the creepy stalker! I'm a pervert, but I accept when someone says no.
Franky: Second!
Also I would imagine Luffy and Nami to slap the robot as while they have mixed feeling they do have family serving the navy (Garp and formerly Bell-mere) not to mention Koby.
Though all the Marines are tough on pirates, there's still a variety of lines they don't cross. In terms of standards, there's the moral and relatively merciful (Aokiji, Fujitora and Smoker), the more ruthless but ultimately neutral (Sengoku), and the ones utterly driven to exterminate evil (Akainu).
Basically, they recognize in and of themselves but do recognize the current head (Akainu) is the worst thing to happen in awhile.
2/1 c29 Bloodrick
Good stuff, btw I know Blackbeard was mentioned, but I still wonder if there would be more addition. Cause frankly, Imu is still out and I bet you five bucks that they and the Gorosei would be interested in a world that currently not flooding.
PS here's a fan song I think you would like.
Sun God Nika – The Forbidden Truth One Piece Tribute Song
Good stuff, btw I know Blackbeard was mentioned, but I still wonder if there would be more addition. Cause frankly, Imu is still out and I bet you five bucks that they and the Gorosei would be interested in a world that currently not flooding.
PS here's a fan song I think you would like.
Sun God Nika – The Forbidden Truth One Piece Tribute Song
1/18 c29 WarlockWarwick
Gotta say I'm loving how well this story is developing.
On another note, I'm curious if you would involve the Creature Commandos in your story?
Dr. Phosphorus would have Chopper probably be interested in his research on curing cancer and be sympathetic once he learns about his family, Brook would also probably be interested in a new skeleton buddy.
Bride would probably be at odds with a few of the other Straw Hat members, but would still get along with Nami and Robin. (Probably wouldn't like Brook, Franky due to association/similarity with Frankenstein)
Weasel would be looked after by Chopper and Luffy, comparing him to an uneducated Mink.
G.I. Robot would be of great interest to most of the men in the crew for obvious reasons, but I would like to think they could draw his attention to the Marines of their world, comparing them to Nazis.
Finally Nina would be taken in by Jinbe as a teacher, while Chopper would be interested in the research that transformed her, hoping to revert her form (like Cheetah) and finding a cure for her condition.
Rick Flag would probably still be a solder through and through, but if he was taken prisoner, might not mind taking a few shots (booze) with Zoro or being courteous with Robin.
Just my 2 cents, but I think they could work well together.
Gotta say I'm loving how well this story is developing.
On another note, I'm curious if you would involve the Creature Commandos in your story?
Dr. Phosphorus would have Chopper probably be interested in his research on curing cancer and be sympathetic once he learns about his family, Brook would also probably be interested in a new skeleton buddy.
Bride would probably be at odds with a few of the other Straw Hat members, but would still get along with Nami and Robin. (Probably wouldn't like Brook, Franky due to association/similarity with Frankenstein)
Weasel would be looked after by Chopper and Luffy, comparing him to an uneducated Mink.
G.I. Robot would be of great interest to most of the men in the crew for obvious reasons, but I would like to think they could draw his attention to the Marines of their world, comparing them to Nazis.
Finally Nina would be taken in by Jinbe as a teacher, while Chopper would be interested in the research that transformed her, hoping to revert her form (like Cheetah) and finding a cure for her condition.
Rick Flag would probably still be a solder through and through, but if he was taken prisoner, might not mind taking a few shots (booze) with Zoro or being courteous with Robin.
Just my 2 cents, but I think they could work well together.
1/10 c29 KHARAKI TAKAN
This has been a fun read, another great story.
Be interesting to see if you actually continue this into the One Piece World though.
This has been a fun read, another great story.
Be interesting to see if you actually continue this into the One Piece World though.