for Justice7/15/2017 c2 CharmingButIrrational
It looks like this story will thrive on contrived and conflict through miscommunication. That's not a good way to carry a story. It makes no sense for the Straw Hats to reach the conclusions they have about the Justice League and that they're only a little better than the World Government. Ridiculous. Robin would not reach that conclusions with her research and that she did just tells me again that it's only there to railroad the story into having the Straw Hats be against the JL. Good luck but not a story i want to read.
It looks like this story will thrive on contrived and conflict through miscommunication. That's not a good way to carry a story. It makes no sense for the Straw Hats to reach the conclusions they have about the Justice League and that they're only a little better than the World Government. Ridiculous. Robin would not reach that conclusions with her research and that she did just tells me again that it's only there to railroad the story into having the Straw Hats be against the JL. Good luck but not a story i want to read.
7/15/2017 c2 YCG
The news about Superman destroying a extremely successful medical company for no reason but paranoia will really bite the League in the but for that in the new and PR.
The news about Superman destroying a extremely successful medical company for no reason but paranoia will really bite the League in the but for that in the new and PR.
7/15/2017 c2 Guest
More Please!
More Please!
7/15/2017 c2 
3Gerbilfriend
This looks like it will be alot of fun and chaos. I like the plot and everyone seems in character.
3GerbilfriendThis looks like it will be alot of fun and chaos. I like the plot and everyone seems in character.
7/15/2017 c2 6Kagehana.Tsukio
Oh shit?! I love this so much! But honestly JL ask ur research better chopper was doing such good but also I get why they're apprehensive... -sigh- looking forward to the next chapter! :D
6Kagehana.TsukioOh shit?! I love this so much! But honestly JL ask ur research better chopper was doing such good but also I get why they're apprehensive... -sigh- looking forward to the next chapter! :D
7/15/2017 c2 8rose7anne101
The part about their experience with ‘justice’ still get to me.
And the ‘freedom’ line is just tag on my heart.
Still my favorite part is Zoro’s eye. I can’t wait to see it in action. LOL
Keep up the great work.
:D
8rose7anne101The part about their experience with ‘justice’ still get to me.
And the ‘freedom’ line is just tag on my heart.
Still my favorite part is Zoro’s eye. I can’t wait to see it in action. LOL
Keep up the great work.
:D
7/15/2017 c1 rose7anne101
You posted!
Excellent job!
This story is going to be awesome (as usual).
I can’t wait for the ‘villains’ joining/turn over …
Sanji’s role here was hilarious. And all the POV are well done.
Keep it up.
You posted!
Excellent job!
This story is going to be awesome (as usual).
I can’t wait for the ‘villains’ joining/turn over …
Sanji’s role here was hilarious. And all the POV are well done.
Keep it up.