for Before Dawn9/12/2020 c1 
13Sailor Dragonball 87
Great job! I had a feeling they were going to marry themselves in that hut. What will happen when the chief finds out what they did? Will he give Pocahontas the same sentence as John Smith? What about when their respective people come to rescue them? I’d love to read more of this! Please update this or write a sequel!
13Sailor Dragonball 87Great job! I had a feeling they were going to marry themselves in that hut. What will happen when the chief finds out what they did? Will he give Pocahontas the same sentence as John Smith? What about when their respective people come to rescue them? I’d love to read more of this! Please update this or write a sequel!
4/3/2019 c1 1twillight forever
SO you should know that there is a story whose summary matches this one's summary pretty closely, plus the exact same title, on AO3 (Archive Of Our Own) under a different author. Just FYI
1twillight foreverSO you should know that there is a story whose summary matches this one's summary pretty closely, plus the exact same title, on AO3 (Archive Of Our Own) under a different author. Just FYI
8/27/2017 c1 Guest
::::::::: plays "Time" from Inception :::::::::
::::::::: plays "Time" from Inception :::::::::
8/11/2017 c1 Guest
This is so good! Please let John Smith live!
LET HIM GOOOO!
I see a little silhouetto of a man
Scaramouch, scaramouch will you do the fandango
Thunderbolt and lightning very very frightening me
Gallileo, Gallileo,
Gallileo, Gallileo,
Gallileo Figaro - magnifico
But I'm just a poor boy and nobody loves me
He's just a poor boy from a poor family
Spare him his life from this monstrosity
Easy come easy go will you let me go
Bismillah! No we will not let you go - let him go
Bismillah! We will not let you go - let him go
Bismillah! We will not let you go let me go
Will not let you go let me go (never)
Never let you go let me go
Never let me go ooo
No, no, no, no, no, no, no
Oh mama mia, mama mia, mama mia let me go
Beelzebub has a devil put aside for me
For me
For me
This is so good! Please let John Smith live!
LET HIM GOOOO!
I see a little silhouetto of a man
Scaramouch, scaramouch will you do the fandango
Thunderbolt and lightning very very frightening me
Gallileo, Gallileo,
Gallileo, Gallileo,
Gallileo Figaro - magnifico
But I'm just a poor boy and nobody loves me
He's just a poor boy from a poor family
Spare him his life from this monstrosity
Easy come easy go will you let me go
Bismillah! No we will not let you go - let him go
Bismillah! We will not let you go - let him go
Bismillah! We will not let you go let me go
Will not let you go let me go (never)
Never let you go let me go
Never let me go ooo
No, no, no, no, no, no, no
Oh mama mia, mama mia, mama mia let me go
Beelzebub has a devil put aside for me
For me
For me
8/11/2017 c1 Guest
THIS IS SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SOSO SOOOOOO GOOD
This is so sad.
Please let him live and please give her a way out with Askook!
THIS IS SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SOSO SOOOOOO GOOD
This is so sad.
Please let him live and please give her a way out with Askook!
7/26/2017 c1 PocaJohntas
PLEAS update.
PLEAS update.
7/26/2017 c1 Babyb26
This is such a great work of romance, heart ache, and beauty. My dear you are an excellent word smith whose talent is endless. I laughed a bit in this fic, was frustrated too at John Smith, and cried with them. To make your readers feel what your characters do is a real talent of a writer and boy are you talented. I wish more people would tell you how great you are, because I know people are reading this. But just so you know, I think the world of your writing and this story- and please let him live!
This is such a great work of romance, heart ache, and beauty. My dear you are an excellent word smith whose talent is endless. I laughed a bit in this fic, was frustrated too at John Smith, and cried with them. To make your readers feel what your characters do is a real talent of a writer and boy are you talented. I wish more people would tell you how great you are, because I know people are reading this. But just so you know, I think the world of your writing and this story- and please let him live!
7/18/2017 c1 173HC247
Yay for new story! Finally! (You love me...)
This was amazing. I loved their mini-wedding before they got down to business and i also love John's constant snark, even in life-threatening situations. He never loses his humor, does he?
I will admit that I may or may not had to open a window in my office after reading this too, but I digress..
Interested to see what will happen next, although you could end it here and leave the rest to imagination. Me being me, I'm hoping for a happy ending, but if you do choose to knock John off, at least it'll be a 'what a way to go' situation :)
Fantastic work, my friend! Welcome back!
173HC247Yay for new story! Finally! (You love me...)
This was amazing. I loved their mini-wedding before they got down to business and i also love John's constant snark, even in life-threatening situations. He never loses his humor, does he?
I will admit that I may or may not had to open a window in my office after reading this too, but I digress..
Interested to see what will happen next, although you could end it here and leave the rest to imagination. Me being me, I'm hoping for a happy ending, but if you do choose to knock John off, at least it'll be a 'what a way to go' situation :)
Fantastic work, my friend! Welcome back!