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10/27/2018 c3 Carina Smyth
You need to carry on with this before I get pissed off.
12/12/2017 c3 1lovablesparkle
I really wanna see more of this story. Please update.
11/21/2017 c3 Guest

This is actually really good. Keep up the good work
11/9/2017 c3 2Diana-The-Parakeet-29
8/24/2017 c3 26The Phantom Dragon
Sounds promising. So long as it will include Henry whump I'm in with rum.
7/27/2017 c3 MMM73181
well what are will and lizzie gonna think about jacks letter (aside from the fact that YES jack can write) lol and somehow SOMEHOW I DONT think henry and carina are gonna just STAY OUT of this if they're left behind they'll catch up lol and if barbossa is still somehow alive ( i really wouldn't mind, mind you) after all carina is his daughter so he should be around if anyone like jones tries to cause her problems and I'm sure carina would want to see jack again to learn more about her father as well course if jones is back who can say anyone else cant be? sorry not a Norrington fan be still ive always just not been able to help wanting him to really choose a side (jack and co.'s) so anyway the movie really didn't explain where/what has become of ol bootstrap anyway
7/26/2017 c3 Shani8
Aww... it was awesome to see an update for this story today. You definitely made my ho-hum Wed. all the nicer! :)

I love that you had cute moments between both H/C and W/E here. It made the hopeless shipper in me very happy! :)

Love that Jack reached out to Elizabeth and Will too, that was a nice touch. I look forward to the chaos that ensues when the legendary trio tries to work together, LOL. I have a feeling it will be a fun and exciting ride! :D

Looking forward to more and hope you update soon. Happy writing!

xo Shani :)
7/23/2017 c2 3Maliya Snow
i really like the story please contineu
7/22/2017 c2 Shani8
Another lovely chapter! Loved the W/E cuteness, it made me smile. :)

It was nice to see Jack visiting his dad too. I look forward to more. Happy writing!

xo Shani :)
7/19/2017 c1 Guest
Have a little play around with some figurative language, and keep in mind that people reading ff know the movies, so you don't need to go overboard with the more obvious details, such as the full names of every character. Really, just spice it up a bit and have some fun.
7/17/2017 c1 Smithy
Thank goodness it's Willabeth, along with Henrina. Now, the question is, is the 'A' Angelica or Anamaria. I always liked her better, and Angelica seems kinda selfish.
7/17/2017 c1 Shani8
It was so nice to see this new story from you today, featuring all my favorite ships! :)

I think you're off to a great start, and I look forward to more. Happy writing!

xo Shani :)

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