
3/8/2022 c5 XxCaseyXx
What a fucking let down of a story? After everything they did to save Tatsumi you really had to fucking give him amnesia. You couldn't just let me come back to normal no you had to add this unnecessary drama of amnesia. Wasted hours reading this only for him to have fucking amnesia and basically nullify everything they did for him.
What a fucking let down of a story? After everything they did to save Tatsumi you really had to fucking give him amnesia. You couldn't just let me come back to normal no you had to add this unnecessary drama of amnesia. Wasted hours reading this only for him to have fucking amnesia and basically nullify everything they did for him.
12/30/2021 c13 Rockman25
Great Story! There were some moments that could have been fleshed out more, but overall excellent story.
Great Story! There were some moments that could have been fleshed out more, but overall excellent story.
2/6/2021 c6 Guest
You need to transfer this to ao3. Its much easier there and the ui on mobile is pretty good
You need to transfer this to ao3. Its much easier there and the ui on mobile is pretty good
2/1/2021 c11 J23
A webo se qdo con las 2
A webo se qdo con las 2
11/6/2020 c11 Mike
Dude this was awesome especially for a first I've read a 100th that was worse than this and they had experience keep it up!
Dude this was awesome especially for a first I've read a 100th that was worse than this and they had experience keep it up!
11/6/2020 c7 Mike
I would pic Akame
I would pic Akame
10/10/2020 c11 Guest
Plz bring back lemon part
Plz bring back lemon part
9/12/2020 c12 Ompfs
I love it, bookmarked it, and will continously come back to it every few months or so just to read it again.
I love it, bookmarked it, and will continously come back to it every few months or so just to read it again.
7/29/2020 c10 BobMan6006
Heh, might be a bit too late to the party but if you want a review, I'll deliver. I enjoy this book, and there's not much I can recommend for you to improve. I like your choice of words, lack of grammar mistakes, and the characters aren't necessarily OOC. I'm excited to finish this and read the sequel.
Heh, might be a bit too late to the party but if you want a review, I'll deliver. I enjoy this book, and there's not much I can recommend for you to improve. I like your choice of words, lack of grammar mistakes, and the characters aren't necessarily OOC. I'm excited to finish this and read the sequel.
6/17/2020 c13
13rdReader
I truly enjoyed yer story, It has an interesting plot line and you didnt cram it all into small incomprehensible chapters or over explain everything. As you said, yer english was a bit off, but it wasnt to a degree where it didnt make sense. Just a few grammar mistakes. I only wish that you had finished the story with an explanation of how they settled down, what kind of interactions the three lovers and their children have. But thats just a personal preference. Keep up the good work, with yer stories and yer english.

I truly enjoyed yer story, It has an interesting plot line and you didnt cram it all into small incomprehensible chapters or over explain everything. As you said, yer english was a bit off, but it wasnt to a degree where it didnt make sense. Just a few grammar mistakes. I only wish that you had finished the story with an explanation of how they settled down, what kind of interactions the three lovers and their children have. But thats just a personal preference. Keep up the good work, with yer stories and yer english.