for The Hanging Garden of the West7/28/2017 c2 Guest
please add arthuria pendragon for become his queen with fem kyuubi
please add arthuria pendragon for become his queen with fem kyuubi
7/28/2017 c2 Guest
Absolutely fucking trash
Absolutely fucking trash
7/28/2017 c2 Guest
Hope you find a way to give Kurumi a body, then have her and Naruto confront Kushina in the future. That would probably be the best way to say 'fuck you Kushina, YOU WERE WRONG'.
Hope you find a way to give Kurumi a body, then have her and Naruto confront Kushina in the future. That would probably be the best way to say 'fuck you Kushina, YOU WERE WRONG'.
7/29/2017 c2 Aceofspades2255
Temari and kurotsuchi! Neither of them ever get any love and it makes me sad! Also great story! Can't wait to see more from you!
Temari and kurotsuchi! Neither of them ever get any love and it makes me sad! Also great story! Can't wait to see more from you!
7/29/2017 c2 Joker Solomon Kane
will Minato and Kushina relies Naruto is there own son not the Kyuubi and how will Kushina come to grip that she been hurting and trying to kill her own son for years
will Minato and Kushina relies Naruto is there own son not the Kyuubi and how will Kushina come to grip that she been hurting and trying to kill her own son for years
7/29/2017 c2 
3clio1111
Good God, I cried when I thought that Mizuki would actually rape poor Naruto - thank u sword! I hate rapes! And please, would someone be kind enough to bash Kushina's head to the nearest hard surface. I really hope for that bitch to die in a most painful and horrible way! Hope 4 more soon.
3clio1111Good God, I cried when I thought that Mizuki would actually rape poor Naruto - thank u sword! I hate rapes! And please, would someone be kind enough to bash Kushina's head to the nearest hard surface. I really hope for that bitch to die in a most painful and horrible way! Hope 4 more soon.
7/29/2017 c2 22Tensa-Zangetsu102
Shouldn't there be a major punishment for those in the Uzumaki Clan for abusing/abandoning blood relatives? If so, then use it if you're planning on taking your sweet-ass time with the next chapter or the story altogether!
22Tensa-Zangetsu102Shouldn't there be a major punishment for those in the Uzumaki Clan for abusing/abandoning blood relatives? If so, then use it if you're planning on taking your sweet-ass time with the next chapter or the story altogether!
7/28/2017 c2 Sovereign49
You make many things right with this story, but in my opinion also a few wrong.
Let it be known that I like neglect and abandonment storys.
You're bringing in a new perspective with him being the heir of someone who is not his biological parents (does it make him a demigod or something?)
Also your writing is at an overall good level.
What strikes me as curious:
- Does Minato really not notice the villages and Kushinas behaviour toward Naruto?
I know many storys make him into an ignorant idiot.
- I find it hard to believe that a person like Tsunade really would do nothing about Naruto's treatment (other than treating his wounds)
- The near rape scene ... eeh. Again, I know many authors do this, but. It just seems so cliché by now. It's a plotdevice to show how despicable the citizens of Konoha are, but we now that already. Only thing that could come from it is the even 'more shocked' reaction it would have to get out of Minato, should he someday know. Then again, would it really be more shocking than the behaviour of his wife and the villagers already are?
Other than that, I look forward to see what direction you'll take with this story.
You make many things right with this story, but in my opinion also a few wrong.
Let it be known that I like neglect and abandonment storys.
You're bringing in a new perspective with him being the heir of someone who is not his biological parents (does it make him a demigod or something?)
Also your writing is at an overall good level.
What strikes me as curious:
- Does Minato really not notice the villages and Kushinas behaviour toward Naruto?
I know many storys make him into an ignorant idiot.
- I find it hard to believe that a person like Tsunade really would do nothing about Naruto's treatment (other than treating his wounds)
- The near rape scene ... eeh. Again, I know many authors do this, but. It just seems so cliché by now. It's a plotdevice to show how despicable the citizens of Konoha are, but we now that already. Only thing that could come from it is the even 'more shocked' reaction it would have to get out of Minato, should he someday know. Then again, would it really be more shocking than the behaviour of his wife and the villagers already are?
Other than that, I look forward to see what direction you'll take with this story.