for The Hanging Garden of the West7/28/2017 c2 JauneArc354
It's very great and interesting, I say you should have okita souji aka (Sakura Saber) from fate grand order or mordred aka (Saber of Red).
It's very great and interesting, I say you should have okita souji aka (Sakura Saber) from fate grand order or mordred aka (Saber of Red).
7/28/2017 c2 
7StuphinUrMuphin
Fucking sick! Why the FUCK do people have to go ahead and write this type of sick twisted shit! The beating and torturing was enough but the almost rape?! You have a disgusting mind! People get their fics bammed for small things but fics like this bever do! That was fucking disgusting dude! I was really looking forward to reading this fic all the way through after the first chapter but I'm fucking repulsed. Put up a warning so people who don't want to read that crap can know what sick shit is in this story!
7StuphinUrMuphinFucking sick! Why the FUCK do people have to go ahead and write this type of sick twisted shit! The beating and torturing was enough but the almost rape?! You have a disgusting mind! People get their fics bammed for small things but fics like this bever do! That was fucking disgusting dude! I was really looking forward to reading this fic all the way through after the first chapter but I'm fucking repulsed. Put up a warning so people who don't want to read that crap can know what sick shit is in this story!
7/28/2017 c2 DragonPony022
Great chapter I can't wait to see what will happen next. I am sure Kushina and Minato's marriage might be over when this is all said and done. I kinda hope she doesn't just flip and all of a sudden start thinking of Naruto as her baby boy or some shit. I mean when you have spent YEARS thinking of someone as something. It will take time and some real soul searching to really start to change how one thinks. But I do know it will cause some major issues when this gets out that is for sure. I mean there is no way to know that Mito can control the chakra without the soul to help regulate it. That much raw violent chakra pumping into her would be VERY dangerous. I just think Minato will blame himself alot more than Kushina till some time goes by and she is forced to really reflect on what she has done.
Great chapter I can't wait to see what will happen next. I am sure Kushina and Minato's marriage might be over when this is all said and done. I kinda hope she doesn't just flip and all of a sudden start thinking of Naruto as her baby boy or some shit. I mean when you have spent YEARS thinking of someone as something. It will take time and some real soul searching to really start to change how one thinks. But I do know it will cause some major issues when this gets out that is for sure. I mean there is no way to know that Mito can control the chakra without the soul to help regulate it. That much raw violent chakra pumping into her would be VERY dangerous. I just think Minato will blame himself alot more than Kushina till some time goes by and she is forced to really reflect on what she has done.
7/28/2017 c2 1Narutothegawd
This pretty good, i like it but was kind of piss that you made fem kyuubi so fearful and weak considering she come a primordial god tree or you just going to gloss over that fact but i will still it read and review it.
1NarutothegawdThis pretty good, i like it but was kind of piss that you made fem kyuubi so fearful and weak considering she come a primordial god tree or you just going to gloss over that fact but i will still it read and review it.
7/21/2017 c1 twirl
Great beginning :)
Great beginning :)
7/23/2017 c1 RiuRid12
a typical neglect fic...
the one where naru abandoned since birth and etc, etc, get beaten, etc,etc, hate everything, etc,etc...
this theme is getting old...
i can foreseen this fic will be halted in the middle of the story and unfinished...
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just stating my thought, whether yo see it as flame or critique for the lack of creativity.
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oh, and one more thing, there is a lot off misspelled and grammar problem.
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a typical neglect fic...
the one where naru abandoned since birth and etc, etc, get beaten, etc,etc, hate everything, etc,etc...
this theme is getting old...
i can foreseen this fic will be halted in the middle of the story and unfinished...
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just stating my thought, whether yo see it as flame or critique for the lack of creativity.
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oh, and one more thing, there is a lot off misspelled and grammar problem.
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7/20/2017 c1 Guest
make kami punish the shinigami
make kami punish the shinigami
7/20/2017 c1 Guest
I mean seriously...You have three of the best Sealing Masters in the entire shinobi history and they immediately think he is the kyuubi just by looking at his eyes. Fucken Ridiculous good luck with your cliche story -_-
I mean seriously...You have three of the best Sealing Masters in the entire shinobi history and they immediately think he is the kyuubi just by looking at his eyes. Fucken Ridiculous good luck with your cliche story -_-
7/19/2017 c1 Guest
stupid kushina convincing minato that he is not his son, well orochimaru, tsunade and sarutobi will keep him safe from his moronic parents and jiraiya.
stupid kushina convincing minato that he is not his son, well orochimaru, tsunade and sarutobi will keep him safe from his moronic parents and jiraiya.
7/19/2017 c1 Jo
Just do a harem other Crossover Lord Marksman and Vanadis, Fairy Tail, Claymore, Freezing, Attack of the Titans, Hellsing, Final Fantasy series, Fate Stay Series, The Legend of Korra, Kuroinu, Hyakka Ryoran, Majikoi Oh Samurai Girls, Dynasty Warriors, and others no Orochimaru, Tsunade, and Sarutobi bashing
Just do a harem other Crossover Lord Marksman and Vanadis, Fairy Tail, Claymore, Freezing, Attack of the Titans, Hellsing, Final Fantasy series, Fate Stay Series, The Legend of Korra, Kuroinu, Hyakka Ryoran, Majikoi Oh Samurai Girls, Dynasty Warriors, and others no Orochimaru, Tsunade, and Sarutobi bashing
7/19/2017 c1 naruto
great chapter keep it up
great chapter keep it up