for The Hanging Garden of the West12/8/2017 c2 
2Grim24
I'm not gonna read this anymore if this continue so much all the things i hate in a fanfiction is in here good example is the over forgiving of Naruto to any person who hurt him his naive way of outlook in life and another thing like i said i'm not gonna read this anymore i'm gonna treat it as a fanfiction that didn't exist so i'm gonna assumed that Naruto will inherited Emiysa's naive dream of hero of justice if so then we have nothing to to talk anymore it's just another cancer added in the already cancerous site.
2Grim24I'm not gonna read this anymore if this continue so much all the things i hate in a fanfiction is in here good example is the over forgiving of Naruto to any person who hurt him his naive way of outlook in life and another thing like i said i'm not gonna read this anymore i'm gonna treat it as a fanfiction that didn't exist so i'm gonna assumed that Naruto will inherited Emiysa's naive dream of hero of justice if so then we have nothing to to talk anymore it's just another cancer added in the already cancerous site.
12/3/2017 c4 Anonymous
I can't wait to see how the Leaf ninjas, especially Minato and Kushina, will react when they find out Naruto is the King of the West.
I can't wait to see how the Leaf ninjas, especially Minato and Kushina, will react when they find out Naruto is the King of the West.
12/1/2017 c4 Dino aids
I love the way you integrated everyone to the story and blended all the different shows together. Excellent job mate!
I love the way you integrated everyone to the story and blended all the different shows together. Excellent job mate!
11/30/2017 c1 Ratty13
I know this is your first story, but couldn't you have attempted something less cliched "he has red eyes, it's not my son"?
I know this is your first story, but couldn't you have attempted something less cliched "he has red eyes, it's not my son"?
11/29/2017 c4 Guest
well minato id stupid for believing his wife.
well minato id stupid for believing his wife.
11/29/2017 c4 Guest
Good chapter and I still don't know who is nel's mother XD
Good chapter and I still don't know who is nel's mother XD
11/29/2017 c4 blueleader73
Loved it, i can't wait to see more and wish you the best of luck in writing, in and life.
Loved it, i can't wait to see more and wish you the best of luck in writing, in and life.
11/28/2017 c4 2Aceofspades2255
Glad to see this fic start moving again. I love the concept so I've been anxiously awaiting new chapters. Keep up the good work bud
2Aceofspades2255Glad to see this fic start moving again. I love the concept so I've been anxiously awaiting new chapters. Keep up the good work bud