for The Hanging Garden of the West11/3/2017 c1 
6Silverknight26
nice fanficplease keep writing and I vote for mito (if the poll hasn't closed yet)
6Silverknight26nice fanficplease keep writing and I vote for mito (if the poll hasn't closed yet)
10/29/2017 c3 Guest
Interesting story can't wait for the next chapter
Interesting story can't wait for the next chapter
10/31/2017 c3 gohan90
I love neglected Naruto story ideas but one thing I hate that you(and almost every neglected-fic) have done in chap-2 that made me stop reading is the relationship with Mito.
With Kushina raising her she would be raised to hate Naruto as well, no matter how good of a person Mito is being raised like that she would have hated him all her life. It makes absolutely no sense for her to like Naruto or treat him well, with the way she would have been raised her entire life she would hate him as much as Kushina if not more even if she doesn't know why she hates him.
Since Kushina thinks he is the fox she would also never let them play or spend any time together even if Mito wanted to(which she wouldn't) and on top of that if she thinks he is the fox threatening to hurt Mito makes no sense, from her point of view Naruto/the fox wouldn't care about Mito so it is meaningless.
Tsunade and Orochimaru not telling Minato or him finding out some other way is very stupid.
Stopped reading as soon as I saw the mention of Mito being nice to him and the way Kushina and Mito treat him because I knew like every other neglect story he is gonna end up paired with Mito. I quickly checked chapter 3 and the top of the chapter shows Mito winning a poll to be a part of his harem because of course she is.
I am very disappointed because the story is well written and the first chapter was very interesting and pretty different from the other neglect fics I have seen but of course it is gonna go the same way ever almost every other story where he ends up fucking his sister.
I have no problem with incest stories or stories with any kind of pairing including harem/yaoi as long as the relationship makes sense. This one does not make sense, it is idiotic which is a damn shame since from the first chapter you look to be one of the better authors on this site.
I love neglected Naruto story ideas but one thing I hate that you(and almost every neglected-fic) have done in chap-2 that made me stop reading is the relationship with Mito.
With Kushina raising her she would be raised to hate Naruto as well, no matter how good of a person Mito is being raised like that she would have hated him all her life. It makes absolutely no sense for her to like Naruto or treat him well, with the way she would have been raised her entire life she would hate him as much as Kushina if not more even if she doesn't know why she hates him.
Since Kushina thinks he is the fox she would also never let them play or spend any time together even if Mito wanted to(which she wouldn't) and on top of that if she thinks he is the fox threatening to hurt Mito makes no sense, from her point of view Naruto/the fox wouldn't care about Mito so it is meaningless.
Tsunade and Orochimaru not telling Minato or him finding out some other way is very stupid.
Stopped reading as soon as I saw the mention of Mito being nice to him and the way Kushina and Mito treat him because I knew like every other neglect story he is gonna end up paired with Mito. I quickly checked chapter 3 and the top of the chapter shows Mito winning a poll to be a part of his harem because of course she is.
I am very disappointed because the story is well written and the first chapter was very interesting and pretty different from the other neglect fics I have seen but of course it is gonna go the same way ever almost every other story where he ends up fucking his sister.
I have no problem with incest stories or stories with any kind of pairing including harem/yaoi as long as the relationship makes sense. This one does not make sense, it is idiotic which is a damn shame since from the first chapter you look to be one of the better authors on this site.
10/29/2017 c3 PhenexGundamKai
A good weapon weapon would be the War heavy sword from Warframe. It’s fun to use in game and looks badass as it has energy that form the blade which extends it great range and is sentient. Just look it up to get a good look as word can’t describe how awesome it looks.
A good weapon weapon would be the War heavy sword from Warframe. It’s fun to use in game and looks badass as it has energy that form the blade which extends it great range and is sentient. Just look it up to get a good look as word can’t describe how awesome it looks.
10/10/2017 c3 The British Fox
I'm not sure if it's a noble phantasm but maybe the yin yang swords of acher or two ninjato of the same color and/or a sword similar to bahamut in bahamut chronical, that or a kitsune katana or the kiba blades.
I'm not sure if it's a noble phantasm but maybe the yin yang swords of acher or two ninjato of the same color and/or a sword similar to bahamut in bahamut chronical, that or a kitsune katana or the kiba blades.
10/9/2017 c2 deathcornfive
good story but I don't think gilgamesh can kill the kyuubi the raw power necessary to do that means he can destroy the world
good story but I don't think gilgamesh can kill the kyuubi the raw power necessary to do that means he can destroy the world
10/9/2017 c4 Existential ERROR
so ... the poll is on another site? because it does not have any in the profile
so ... the poll is on another site? because it does not have any in the profile