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Génial une suite discution avec Daenerys!
Génial une suite discution avec Daenerys!
7/20/2017 c1 
8Shian1998
Great story! Really love this show as well. Agreed that the latest episode was awesome! Really looking forward to the rest of the season.
Really enjoyed your alternate version of this conversation. Felt really sorry for Theon as he was pushed into talking about it; although while it clearly increased his pain for that moment, hopefully it would help him heal in the long run. Glad that this gave Daenerys extra motivation to take the throne and clean out the evil scum that for, too much of population of Westeros. Hopefully in the show Daenerys succeeds in leaving Westeros a far better place than she found it, like she has done with the Bay of Dragons.
Not sure if you deliberately changed this or made a mistake, but at this point in the show Tyrion wasn't named Hand of the Queen yet. That happened in the episode after this. Doesn't really matter for this story though.
Is this a completed one-shot, or the beginning of a multi-chaptered story? If it's a one-shot, it was still quite good on its own. If your continuing this, I'd be pretty interested in how this affects Daenerys' actions, the relations she forms with various factions, and how Theon heals from what the monstrous Ramsay did to him.
If this was a one-shot, great job with this! If it's being continued, great start, and looking forward to the next update!
8Shian1998Great story! Really love this show as well. Agreed that the latest episode was awesome! Really looking forward to the rest of the season.
Really enjoyed your alternate version of this conversation. Felt really sorry for Theon as he was pushed into talking about it; although while it clearly increased his pain for that moment, hopefully it would help him heal in the long run. Glad that this gave Daenerys extra motivation to take the throne and clean out the evil scum that for, too much of population of Westeros. Hopefully in the show Daenerys succeeds in leaving Westeros a far better place than she found it, like she has done with the Bay of Dragons.
Not sure if you deliberately changed this or made a mistake, but at this point in the show Tyrion wasn't named Hand of the Queen yet. That happened in the episode after this. Doesn't really matter for this story though.
Is this a completed one-shot, or the beginning of a multi-chaptered story? If it's a one-shot, it was still quite good on its own. If your continuing this, I'd be pretty interested in how this affects Daenerys' actions, the relations she forms with various factions, and how Theon heals from what the monstrous Ramsay did to him.
If this was a one-shot, great job with this! If it's being continued, great start, and looking forward to the next update!
7/20/2017 c1 3Minna Vipera
Is this a completed one-shot or are you going to keep writing about how Denaerys and Tyrion react to this information? It's a bit too late to help in the BotB but it'd probably be a good idea to establish good relations with the North and Tyrion may be interested in getting his wife back. And when they get to Dragonstone they'd just so happen to sit on top of a lot of dragonglass, which is more valuable than gold in the north at the moment...
3Minna ViperaIs this a completed one-shot or are you going to keep writing about how Denaerys and Tyrion react to this information? It's a bit too late to help in the BotB but it'd probably be a good idea to establish good relations with the North and Tyrion may be interested in getting his wife back. And when they get to Dragonstone they'd just so happen to sit on top of a lot of dragonglass, which is more valuable than gold in the north at the moment...
7/19/2017 c1 1victoria.terreros
I just wish you could write a sequel or sequels...there is something in your story that's very appealling. Great work!
1victoria.terrerosI just wish you could write a sequel or sequels...there is something in your story that's very appealling. Great work!