for In Disneyland3/16/2023 c1 Ravenclawfashioncathp02 2.0
Hey! I’m 11 too! I love Harry Potter, loved the story and you have good writing skills, trust me I’ve see some shitty writing. Good job loved it
Hey! I’m 11 too! I love Harry Potter, loved the story and you have good writing skills, trust me I’ve see some shitty writing. Good job loved it
7/23/2017 c1 franchessybee
You have great promise. Keep improving, we'll be waiting for your new stories.
You have great promise. Keep improving, we'll be waiting for your new stories.
7/22/2017 c1 Guest
You are one budding writer. This fic is adorable, keep going.
You are one budding writer. This fic is adorable, keep going.
7/21/2017 c1 
3hotrodkatara
You have a few grammatical errors, but aside from that, I think it's fantastic!
3hotrodkataraYou have a few grammatical errors, but aside from that, I think it's fantastic!
7/20/2017 c1 Guest
It was a cute little story. It reminded me of my first trip to Disneyland
It was a cute little story. It reminded me of my first trip to Disneyland