for The Rose in the Snake Pit10/6/2022 c4 Julianosse
Yop,
It's me (julien), just to let you know if you want help or whatever.
My mail has been hacked, so yeah if you want to communicate it would be with this account. '
Yop,
It's me (julien), just to let you know if you want help or whatever.
My mail has been hacked, so yeah if you want to communicate it would be with this account. '
8/6/2022 c4 julienc596
Yop,
It's cool and good, the story is still on the go? I mean it has been 4years.
And to answer the question like someone previously said why not go for the snakes sand x Lucas x Daenerys.
Yop,
It's cool and good, the story is still on the go? I mean it has been 4years.
And to answer the question like someone previously said why not go for the snakes sand x Lucas x Daenerys.
1/29/2019 c4 Guest 47
Don’t suppose that in the rewrite Tyene could join Lukas and Nym on there trip and there fun
Plus hope Daenerys and Lukas get along just as well as they did in this version
So go Lukas x Nym x Tyene x Daenerys
Don’t suppose that in the rewrite Tyene could join Lukas and Nym on there trip and there fun
Plus hope Daenerys and Lukas get along just as well as they did in this version
So go Lukas x Nym x Tyene x Daenerys
11/21/2018 c4 Shrednector15
Great story. Glad to see that you are going to re-write it. There aren’t many male oc tyrell stories out there. Hope to see the re-write up soon. Have a god day.
Great story. Glad to see that you are going to re-write it. There aren’t many male oc tyrell stories out there. Hope to see the re-write up soon. Have a god day.
11/13/2018 c4 alec-potter
It was a good story.
Lukas looks to be an interesting character with his own demons.
Nymeria, for reasons outlined by Lukas, might be good for short term fling, but Dany seemed a much better companion for the longer term. Plus he gets to be the Queen consort or King.
The scene about finding Brightroar was a bit too much and could be removed.
I rather prefered your style of focusing on major events rather than having each day just for sake of continuity.
Keep writing.
It was a good story.
Lukas looks to be an interesting character with his own demons.
Nymeria, for reasons outlined by Lukas, might be good for short term fling, but Dany seemed a much better companion for the longer term. Plus he gets to be the Queen consort or King.
The scene about finding Brightroar was a bit too much and could be removed.
I rather prefered your style of focusing on major events rather than having each day just for sake of continuity.
Keep writing.
11/13/2018 c2 alec-potter
Nice chapter and interesting start to the story.
Though the begining to the relationship made sense, not sure why would anyone want to have a committed relationship with the sand snakes for the reasons already outlined by the protagonist.
Nice chapter and interesting start to the story.
Though the begining to the relationship made sense, not sure why would anyone want to have a committed relationship with the sand snakes for the reasons already outlined by the protagonist.
11/5/2018 c4 Guest
Jon, Sansa, Arya, Gendry, just about all the regulers need to be addressed in some way. Bran of course, Love Bronn. Where will he end up ? With Tyrion ? So many charactors, so little time. Good you are going back to Season 2 ! Maybe save Robb ?
Jon, Sansa, Arya, Gendry, just about all the regulers need to be addressed in some way. Bran of course, Love Bronn. Where will he end up ? With Tyrion ? So many charactors, so little time. Good you are going back to Season 2 ! Maybe save Robb ?
11/5/2018 c3 Marvelmyra
How will you deal with the Dany is sterile issue ? Jusr wondering since he is the last of the Tyrells.
How will you deal with the Dany is sterile issue ? Jusr wondering since he is the last of the Tyrells.
11/5/2018 c4 ShadyBlazin
Hopefully if this is remade, we have mention of what happened to Garlan and Willas.
Hopefully if this is remade, we have mention of what happened to Garlan and Willas.
11/4/2018 c4 
8Hail King Cerion
Here's an idea. You could start from when Renly and Loras enter Highgarden, your welcome to use some concepts from my own story about a Oc Tyrell.
Sorry the first version wasn't what you wanted it to be, can't wait for the rewrite.
8Hail King CerionHere's an idea. You could start from when Renly and Loras enter Highgarden, your welcome to use some concepts from my own story about a Oc Tyrell.
Sorry the first version wasn't what you wanted it to be, can't wait for the rewrite.
11/4/2018 c4 1AZW330
Just discovered this story, and I already can't wait for the re-write! There are soooooo few Tyrell OCs, and a pairing with one of the Sand Snakes makes it even more interesting. I'll make sure to keep my eye open for the re-write!
1AZW330Just discovered this story, and I already can't wait for the re-write! There are soooooo few Tyrell OCs, and a pairing with one of the Sand Snakes makes it even more interesting. I'll make sure to keep my eye open for the re-write!
8/26/2018 c3 SerMeow
I really enjoyed reading these last three chapters, I must say I hope you make more in future. And as for the pairings I believe a Lukas/daenerys story is not as interesting as an Lukas/Nymeria story, my reasoning for this is I've seen enough OC/Dany for my tastes, I have not seen many stories including sand snakes especially in a romantic way. I like the idea of them together and would love to read more about the sand snakes. And personality wise they fit together Nymeria like Lukas is a skilled warrior and an intelligent lady, she is a very good person to have by your side especially in these turbulent times. The potential for drama between Daenerys and Nymeria fighting over Lukas is also a possibility to look forward to. Overall this is a very enjoyable story, you have my regards and well wishes. I sincerely look forward to seeing more of this in the future.
I really enjoyed reading these last three chapters, I must say I hope you make more in future. And as for the pairings I believe a Lukas/daenerys story is not as interesting as an Lukas/Nymeria story, my reasoning for this is I've seen enough OC/Dany for my tastes, I have not seen many stories including sand snakes especially in a romantic way. I like the idea of them together and would love to read more about the sand snakes. And personality wise they fit together Nymeria like Lukas is a skilled warrior and an intelligent lady, she is a very good person to have by your side especially in these turbulent times. The potential for drama between Daenerys and Nymeria fighting over Lukas is also a possibility to look forward to. Overall this is a very enjoyable story, you have my regards and well wishes. I sincerely look forward to seeing more of this in the future.