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10/28/2020 c1 1nibi no matatabi
I'm disappointed with the length of this
7/6/2020 c1 rincheddorjie
Man come on you gotta update this story it's nice and I enjoy most of the naruto x fairy tail where naruto is in a relationship with erza, mirajane and cana. I also wanna know if there is stories similar to the one I mentioned in the sentence. So can anyone let me know.
5/7/2020 c1 galayeeted
Dude i cant wait for the next update, this is going to be sick i already know
5/5/2020 c1 1MonsterCritic96
I think you are an unreliable author people ask for an update or even an answer to questions but you don't get back to them so you abandoned your stories or put them for adoption because I'm confused
11/9/2019 c1 Darth revan1998
Can't wait for the next update
8/21/2019 c1 Guest
1k for shits and giggles
7/27/2018 c1 1Nishi No Kaze
McRasengan,
I thoroughly enjoyed your description and backstory regarding chakra and Ethernano. Kaguya's success establishes a great foundation for you to build your story's world alongside the world of Fairy Tail. You have various opportunities to branch out and establish your own timeline due to your backstory.
One of my questions would be, where is Kaguya? If she succeeded in stealing the world's chakra I would assume that everybody was trapped in the Eternal Mangeky┼Ź. So for future chapters, you might want to start thinking of a way to explain the reason Kaguya is not around. Maybe she left the earth to harvest more chakra, something like that, y'know?
Overall, it was a nice read. One thing I suggest you work on is fleshing out your character's reactions and interactions. Some scenes could be a bit more powerful if you convey the character's emotion to the reader by placing your character's in motion.

Nishi no Kaze
7/22/2018 c1 Dman101
Honestly do u really need Erza in the Harem? why don't u try someone else like Lucy or Juvia? maybe Levy? anyways I like the way this story is going (hopefully it goes in the canon route) but alright how you gonna do this? Post War Naruto can literally one shot anyone in FT (he has Hogaroma's chakra which is basically saying he has God ki. If he didn't then I would say stonger then Erza and a bit weaker then Laxus) Anyways keeps up the good work my man! :)
8/27/2017 c1 2Exanime Draco
I think your story has potential, but it really needs to be reworked. Contact me if you want details I'm too tired from work to post them now
8/12/2017 c1 Guest
I think it's good so far hopefully u add a few more chapters
7/30/2017 c1 GrandAssassin
Hope for more soon
7/24/2017 c1 Guest
Add Mavis and eclaire to the pairing

Maybe flare?
7/25/2017 c1 bladetri
like XD
7/24/2017 c1 fraxures
Interesting first chapter can't wait for the next chapter
7/24/2017 c1 1waa7x
Nice first chapter man, can't wait til the next one.
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