for Naruto: The Bijuu Mage7/6/2020 c1 rincheddorjie
Man come on you gotta update this story it's nice and I enjoy most of the naruto x fairy tail where naruto is in a relationship with erza, mirajane and cana. I also wanna know if there is stories similar to the one I mentioned in the sentence. So can anyone let me know.
Man come on you gotta update this story it's nice and I enjoy most of the naruto x fairy tail where naruto is in a relationship with erza, mirajane and cana. I also wanna know if there is stories similar to the one I mentioned in the sentence. So can anyone let me know.
5/5/2020 c1 
1MonsterCritic96
I think you are an unreliable author people ask for an update or even an answer to questions but you don't get back to them so you abandoned your stories or put them for adoption because I'm confused
1MonsterCritic96I think you are an unreliable author people ask for an update or even an answer to questions but you don't get back to them so you abandoned your stories or put them for adoption because I'm confused
8/21/2019 c1 Guest
1k for shits and giggles
1k for shits and giggles
7/27/2018 c1 1Nishi No Kaze
McRasengan,
I thoroughly enjoyed your description and backstory regarding chakra and Ethernano. Kaguya's success establishes a great foundation for you to build your story's world alongside the world of Fairy Tail. You have various opportunities to branch out and establish your own timeline due to your backstory.
One of my questions would be, where is Kaguya? If she succeeded in stealing the world's chakra I would assume that everybody was trapped in the Eternal Mangekyō. So for future chapters, you might want to start thinking of a way to explain the reason Kaguya is not around. Maybe she left the earth to harvest more chakra, something like that, y'know?
Overall, it was a nice read. One thing I suggest you work on is fleshing out your character's reactions and interactions. Some scenes could be a bit more powerful if you convey the character's emotion to the reader by placing your character's in motion.
Nishi no Kaze
1Nishi No KazeMcRasengan,
I thoroughly enjoyed your description and backstory regarding chakra and Ethernano. Kaguya's success establishes a great foundation for you to build your story's world alongside the world of Fairy Tail. You have various opportunities to branch out and establish your own timeline due to your backstory.
One of my questions would be, where is Kaguya? If she succeeded in stealing the world's chakra I would assume that everybody was trapped in the Eternal Mangekyō. So for future chapters, you might want to start thinking of a way to explain the reason Kaguya is not around. Maybe she left the earth to harvest more chakra, something like that, y'know?
Overall, it was a nice read. One thing I suggest you work on is fleshing out your character's reactions and interactions. Some scenes could be a bit more powerful if you convey the character's emotion to the reader by placing your character's in motion.
Nishi no Kaze
7/22/2018 c1 Dman101
Honestly do u really need Erza in the Harem? why don't u try someone else like Lucy or Juvia? maybe Levy? anyways I like the way this story is going (hopefully it goes in the canon route) but alright how you gonna do this? Post War Naruto can literally one shot anyone in FT (he has Hogaroma's chakra which is basically saying he has God ki. If he didn't then I would say stonger then Erza and a bit weaker then Laxus) Anyways keeps up the good work my man! :)
Honestly do u really need Erza in the Harem? why don't u try someone else like Lucy or Juvia? maybe Levy? anyways I like the way this story is going (hopefully it goes in the canon route) but alright how you gonna do this? Post War Naruto can literally one shot anyone in FT (he has Hogaroma's chakra which is basically saying he has God ki. If he didn't then I would say stonger then Erza and a bit weaker then Laxus) Anyways keeps up the good work my man! :)
8/27/2017 c1 2Exanime Draco
I think your story has potential, but it really needs to be reworked. Contact me if you want details I'm too tired from work to post them now
2Exanime DracoI think your story has potential, but it really needs to be reworked. Contact me if you want details I'm too tired from work to post them now
8/12/2017 c1 Guest
I think it's good so far hopefully u add a few more chapters
I think it's good so far hopefully u add a few more chapters
7/24/2017 c1 Guest
Add Mavis and eclaire to the pairing
Maybe flare?
Add Mavis and eclaire to the pairing
Maybe flare?