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7/2/2020 c1 11Amaterasu53
Wow - this could be really good!
4/9/2019 c1 laurajustin
Great story! Can't wait for the next update!
1/26/2018 c1 5DawnDion
I love the start of this. I can’t wait to see we’re this goes. As for pairings I love shikanaru but if it don’t flow then another pairing works too
9/13/2017 c1 3SakuraKoi
so good
7/24/2017 c1 Guest
Please don't let her get raped cause that's a common trauma amongst femal naruto fanfics,
Hopefully she'll be a badass ninja kicking butts and taking names, she could be an exact copy of kushina's personality: passionate, loud, prankster but has minato's calm and serious personality when the situation calls for it, especially when she is down right mad she has minato's scary eeery calm demeanour that earned him his moniker "the flash" and when she just plain mad she has kushina temper wih her hair flying around with shadows covering her eye.
7/25/2017 c1 7Every1sBeta
Well, a potential pairing that could work in my opinion that ISN'T the stupidly overdone Sasu-Naru (the ship isn't stupid, just how OVERDONE it is.)

I could possibly see Shikamaru as a potential love interest, OR considering Naruto is going to be growing up raised by Kakashi who...is rather Canine on his own, a potential femme Naruto Kiba? (Which would be a breath of fresh air into this fandom because while it's an underused ship, it's mostly just smut. and porn. and lots more smut.) And Romance itself shouldn't be your focus in my opinion (not that that matters) considering the premise of the story actually looks really good, and i'd love to see where the STORY goes first and foremost.

So yeah, if you can't make a ship work, don't bother with one, it'd be better to have a Gen/plot oriented story that is good and interesting, instead of a pairing oriented story that feels wooden, or rushed.

Anyways, will we be time skipping the early formulative years? Because if so, won't bother me one bit, the really early years always seem to go the same way in fanfiction, so if you can think of a different way, then by all means go for it! :)

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Every1sBeta
7/25/2017 c1 ThunderClaw03
Great job keep it up. You should up the rating to Teen it's the next step in the ratings just to be safe. Update soon
7/24/2017 c1 Kona Momoa
"Aren't you dead? No I'm not... Pain thought he killed me but he failed." I explained. Tsunade bursted in to tears, her pain, the tried so hard to hide was being released. I walked towards her then sat beside her. I pulled in to an embrace and rubbed her back in cirular motions as she sobbed. "Huh? Tsunade..." was all I managed to say but I said nothing else. She leaned in to my embrace, she began to speak. "Jiraiya... You stupid fool... Do you have any idea how much I missed you?" Tsunade inquired, the pain she felt could be heard in her voice, one if the world's strongest kounochi that I had the great honor of knowing and being a friend to was in shambles. "Tsunade... I'm sorry... I said apologizing. Silence soon filled the air, all that need to be said was done in wordless communication...
7/24/2017 c1 Kona Momoa
Uh... Hey when you're doing character point of views, it's important to have the characters speak, write as if you are the character telling the story. For Example: Jiraiya's POV Tsunade sat on the roof of the Hokage tower, wrapping her knees close to her, she looked up at the night sky, though physically present, she wasn't there mentally. Tears ran down her eyes as she cried... No! Moured for Dan... I understood why she was acted tough and why she always pushed me away now like she did when we were kids. She was scared to lose me... So in order to keep me around she pushed me away, knowing that I would keep coming back... People who didn't understand our relationship would say that "I've gone crazy" and chasing after Tsunade was a suicide mission. But I didn't care... I slowly walked up behind the pale haired sun-shine blonde. Then stopped dead in my tracks. She turned around slowly. Her eyes wide with shock. "J-Jiraiya what are you doing here? Didn't Pain kill you? aren't you d- Before Tsunade could finish her sentence, I cut her off, I knew what she was going to say. "I know what you're going to say Hime..."
7/24/2017 c1 Theopgamer1002
Great concept! Can't wait to see what's next!
7/24/2017 c1 Scarease
Third give Naruto to the Anbu quit brilliant,the Anbu answer only to you,she will like get some trainingby them so Danzo pacified some ,she will be highly protected by villages most loyal and elite of your village .hell with in few years she could be S ranked and few years late your successor.
7/24/2017 c1 LucilliaNovaDreyar
Please don't let her be raped as a childhood trauma, cause it's common amongst female naruto and its turns her into a dark character and hates Konoha...
She could have Kushina's personality: Passionate, Loud, Brash, Violent when teased for her "tomato" hair, while also having Minato's calm and intelligent demeanour when the situation calls for it, especially when she is down right furious and has his scary eerily calm anger that earned him his moniker "the flash" which causes people to wet themselves in he presence hahahahahaha while when she is plain mad she has kushina's temper where her hair flies up in tails combine the two and you have the deadly red flash
7/24/2017 c1 unacctivated
it's Sharingan not shirrigan
7/23/2017 c1 naruita14
J'ai adoré le premier chapitre.
Pour le couple j'aime ita/naru ou shisui/naru.

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