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3/22 c1 Preston303
r u going to continue
1/13/2022 c3 Guest
When new chapters are coming. In fall in raynare love interest
7/21/2019 c3 2Xerzo LotCN
random but i personally don't like fics like the natsu one where a mc of one series crossover to another series to take waifus from that as their own especially to replace that series mc
also definitely not a fan of oc mc fics to get waifus period especially to replace that series mc in some way
they just feel wrong to me like the first they have their own series why put them in another when that series already has a male mc and male ocs for that feel especially gross to me sorry

but i dont mind when series crossover to add info from one to another like said adding waifus of one to another or plot points for extra background as long as they are compatible series or time difference to explain it or merging mc somehow as long as it not replacing like say issei has the background of another set in modern day anime series mc instead of canon issei life thats cool he still ise but youve changed his nothing background after irina left but before his second year highschool where dxd start into something cool and changed it etc
7/19/2019 c2 piddle
can you have lavinia reni in the harem issei can meet her through miya as lavinia treats vali as her brother in slash dog canon
7/19/2019 c1 3Gundam Wing Zero
The whole gender bender pairing is not my cup of tea, but do like Risa betrayer stories somewhat. This does feel less rushed.
7/4/2019 c3 1NHarem Foreva
life of the pirate king please
5/22/2019 c3 ACExMAVIS
5/22/2019 c2 ACExMAVIS
10/12/2018 c3 Pablo senju
Conti pls
8/28/2018 c2 Acclaiming
About halfway into the first chapter I was praying for this to be some kind of parody. This is almost as bad as my first story LMAO
8/26/2018 c3 darth56
i do hope it is this story as i did like the start so again thanks
8/18/2018 c2 Halt Jagged
Hey bruh, pretty sure you meant that girlie 'licked' his neck, not kicked. Because that would paint a vastly different first impression. Normally I don't comment on things like this, anyways but it was such a humorous mistake I just felt like there was a need to comment, even though you've been inactive for a few months, you probably won't read this for a while.
6/21/2018 c2 Shadowy Rose
Okay three things...
First, is he gonna steal any women? Like this is important info. Would any previously paired or married women be going his way, or are you just going to conveniently write that nothing bad ever happens and the wives and girlfriends etc are fiercely loyal to their husbands to the point of following them to their eternal no one would think of pleading for their lives or anything.

Second, if you are welcome to genderbends, would you want to use Azazel's 'weapon' that swaps a person's gender and make it permanent to turn Kiba into a girl? Just curious. Or you could always just ignore my questions about this stuff like most author's do anyway.

Lastly, I'm pretty sure that updating more than once every six months is appreciated...speaking of which would you look at the time. Another six months has gone by...


Have a good day

4/5/2018 c1 ACExMAVIS
1/14/2018 c2 3Player Tauz
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