5/2/2018 c5 VitaMia
DAMN! you gotta update soon.. please! This was way too good...
DAMN! you gotta update soon.. please! This was way too good...
5/2/2018 c5 MrOrtega
Bro you’re killing me with these cliffhangers! But great series so far. Keep it up!
Bro you’re killing me with these cliffhangers! But great series so far. Keep it up!
4/29/2018 c5 Reader
More more more.
P.S any lemons?
More more more.
P.S any lemons?
4/28/2018 c4 AlexXaivier
Next Chapter plsssss! **
Next Chapter plsssss! **
4/30/2018 c5 19RoyaldragonSevgisi15
Wow incredible for your first time writing you sure have a amazing writing style! I love this it's sooo damn good! Please update soon this cliffhanger is driving me crazy!
Wow incredible for your first time writing you sure have a amazing writing style! I love this it's sooo damn good! Please update soon this cliffhanger is driving me crazy!
4/29/2018 c5 6maddiesmt
So Happy to see you coming back with this story! Can't wait to read the next Chap!
So Happy to see you coming back with this story! Can't wait to read the next Chap!
4/29/2018 c1 14symbiotic
So I enjoyed this story. The angst and emotions weren't terribly overdone and the dialog is pretty authentic. My only concern is that it seemed to move pretty fast. I thought Souma was going to go a lot longer with Erina not being there. But so far so good.
So I enjoyed this story. The angst and emotions weren't terribly overdone and the dialog is pretty authentic. My only concern is that it seemed to move pretty fast. I thought Souma was going to go a lot longer with Erina not being there. But so far so good.
4/29/2018 c5 2Lordlexx
Woo! An update! Yea, you are good at cliffhangers, but please don't make us wait like that again.
Woo! An update! Yea, you are good at cliffhangers, but please don't make us wait like that again.
4/29/2018 c5 CreammieeSenpai
cliffhanger! pls update again soon i am really excited what will happen on the next chapter
cliffhanger! pls update again soon i am really excited what will happen on the next chapter
4/29/2018 c5 7Eramis8
Quite the change for the confrontation. Getting to see them both struggling with something they both don't have much experience in is awesome.
Quite the change for the confrontation. Getting to see them both struggling with something they both don't have much experience in is awesome.
4/26/2018 c4 SoRina Shipper
Man this a nice fanfiction you made it in the top 2
seat in my SoRina rankings, but I'm still a bit sad for the cliffhanger but I'm looking forward to the next update please update as soon as possible! Salamat at sobrang ganda promise! (if you're a filipino)
Man this a nice fanfiction you made it in the top 2
seat in my SoRina rankings, but I'm still a bit sad for the cliffhanger but I'm looking forward to the next update please update as soon as possible! Salamat at sobrang ganda promise! (if you're a filipino)
4/23/2018 c4 2Lordlexx
People like you that leave stories unfinished should go stub your little toe... all these amazing fanfics left abandoned... they are crying right along with us readers.
People like you that leave stories unfinished should go stub your little toe... all these amazing fanfics left abandoned... they are crying right along with us readers.
1/17/2018 c4 Draigon
Yeah why don't every one of you writer stop at the best fucking part! :(
Yeah why don't every one of you writer stop at the best fucking part! :(